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CGServe
23-03-2012, 04:28 PM
Hello every one,
This is one of my exterior work. Your C&C are valuable for my to improve my work
Software: 3dmax , Vary , Photoshop

http://s19.postimage.org/594uuykk3/Final_Exteriro_Cam01_Compose.jpg (http://postimage.org/image/vu7dqimxb/full/)
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http://s19.postimage.org/594uuykk3/Final_Exteriro_Cam01_Compose.jpg (http://postimage.org/image/vu7dqimxb/full/)
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DAssassin
14-04-2012, 09:52 PM
Nice work on the materials and lighting. Proportions seem to be off in my opinion. Furniture seems to be big when compared to the house or is it the angle at which you have rendered.? Also the sky looks a bit too bright.! Any wireframes?

McFly
14-04-2012, 10:46 PM
Good job mate.
C&C: Sky's too bright, leaves too green and overall a bit too much light. If you lowered intensity, it would loo fab. Front door looks very small! Windows are too reflexive and roof is a bit flat.

So you have a very strong basis and with a couple of adjustments it could be a great image. :)

omessler
16-04-2012, 06:25 AM
Great work