human male

[nadeemmar]

it is being a long time since i posted something online
specially after the damage happened to my hard disk:(

i lost the most recent files i had(audi TT and 2 heads and one character):( :(

anyways here is the guy i'm working on

S/W : 3d max 5.1

[nadeemmar]

back view:

[nadeemmar]

side view:

[Daniel]

I think his body and his head look cool, but the arms are too small for his musculature. Also, it looks really weird how his legs are modeled going backwards.

[nadeemmar]

since i finished my competition entry
i had the time to work more on this guy
comments and suggestions are more than welcome
i started this guy without using any references or concepts
so if you have any ideas ... i will be glad to hear

[nadeemmar]

no replies:ufo:
here is an update:)

[Drew Carey]

Wow man, that's quite an improvment from last time. The chest musculature looks great!
Keep it up!

[chaos_seed]

so much evolution in a so small thread great work ! ! ! maybe we could see his head closer and get a wireframe ?
Looking good !

[sarN]

um yeah holy crap talk about improvement!
that torse looks InCrEdIbLe!

[nadeemmar]

thanx guys for ur replies
here is the wire:

[nadeemmar]

the head wire:

[j_mac]

that looks freaking awsome. but his necks a bit fat

[nadeemmar]

j_mac:thanx for posting
could you please draw over my pics,i want to know what is wrong with the nick
:)

[ido]

there is nothing wrong with the neck in the smoothed version, its only the unsmoothed mesh cage that looks wrong but its not, it is looking good.
nadeemmar it is very good work as always with your work :)

[Muhammad]

Hi! i love this body. I mean the body of this male.
Sorry nadeemmar
plz make the head again as it doesnt match the body.
because the head isnt set for this character the body doesnt exist with as many muscles as it must have with this head. Plz dont make any changes with the muscles like expanding or contracting them
plz make another head and he shall look stylish..

[Jason-Lavoie]

nice man, only crit, legs look to short
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[nadeemmar]

ido: thanx man
Muhammad: make another head !!!.... why you can always modify in 3d;)
if you noticed that the old torso and the new one have almost the same topology
and the head is not finished yet ...i will work on it later
thanx for the comment:)
Jason-Lavoie:hmm.. i didn't notice that .. thanx:)

[A*HOSNY]

nadeemmar Fantastik work as always
and do not listen to Muhammed :p
He is so cool
Keep updating;)

[Muhammad]

u r right nadeemmar sorry.
and u should listen to A*HOSNY as he is write. i m stupid.
u work on the head and make him look a stylish man.
plz expand the muscles of the arms.
i donno whether i m write or not. But if u dont wanna do any change than dont do it.

COOL.
work on the head and give him sunglasses

[j_mac]

alright i marked the area that i think needs to be made less pronounced. i used myself as REF. not to say i'm half as ripped as this guy but it should look similar .

and dont laff at the poor quality pic its my web cam. :P

Hope this clarifies what i ment for yeah

Cheers

Jeff

[3Dan]

Excellent work as ever:D

My only crit, apart what has been pointed out by j_mac, is the nose which should be less thin as would be fitting for a hunk like this.

[nadeemmar]

j_mac: thanx j_mac for the help
actaully it is not noticable after smoothing but still need a little bit of tweaking

Muhammad: you are sorry ...for what
you were trying to help me and you only expressed ur point of view.....
ur comments are more than welcome brother...

A*HOSNY:thanx

3Dan-3DT: long time no see buddy
hows life?
congrats for becoming a mederater ..... tooooooo late isn't it:cool:

you know i wanted to remodel the nose .....
now i will do it

i modeled the arms yesterday...then i selected it and hit delete
:(
it was really bad
i'm remodeling it .... i will update soon

[viper_z989]

the only thing is ...i think legs are bit small..
and mustache you better use furs
overall nice work man:D

[Muhammad]

Hi! NADEEMMAR... SO long ago we havent talked. ok
i really love ur character. try by working on the lips. And what about the arms, cant wait for updates just do it quickly...

OK
as u told me to start something new so i have almost completed a human skull. plz check it and post ur comments:
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=153096#post153096

[Phynius Gauge]

Great job. The model is looking excellent. I don't understand why the legs are positioned at an angle like that, but since you are a better modeller, I am sure you have a good reason;) .

[chaos_seed]

getting better and betterI agree with the others the legs have somthing odd but can't really tell what...
Great work anyway !

[Corky13]

wow that looks very very promising ^^
one question ?
Which method do you use to create the torso ?
Boxextruding or something else ?

[Jason-Lavoie]

Why did you start the accesories when your not even done the model??? ooks good though, LEGS ARE TOO SHORT!

[Corky13]

I have to agree with Jason. The Legs are a little bit to short. Not much but its possible to recognize it.....

[Jason-Lavoie]

If you have the EYE, he heh e... some people can see stuff others can't, i am that ONE!

Or 1 million, but who's counting?

[nadeemmar]

update:

[nadeemmar]

another view

[nadeemmar]

back:

[nadeemmar]

finally i got the time to work on this guy

[Rych]

Nadeemer,

Hey buddy once again a fantastic model! what do you plan to do with this one?

Rych

[nadeemmar]

Finally a reply
i was going to give up (NO WAY;) )

thanx Rych

i'm planning to go with it to the end( texturing , rigging , facial expressions .....etc)

i got bored from the hundreds of unfinished projects i have, so you know:)

[Bracer]

I Have A Silly Question...........Whats With The Tip Over ? Does It Help In Rigging ?

Ha Ha Ha

But Anyway Seriously, I Think This Model's "Form" Is Very Good, That "Solid" Feeling Is Great !

The Hand Is Very Nice[As In Solid]

Sorry, I'am Just Oppsess With Models That Look Very "Solid" And Not That Bubble "Meshsmooth" Feel.

Wait.........On Closer Inspection.......I Think.......Theres Something Wrong With The Fingers, The Middle And Ring Finger Final Knockles Are Off, Like They Have Been Beaten By A Giant Mosquito !

[theta]

belly button is way too low, it should be even with the line that starts the last 2 abs. looks good other than that

[nadeemmar]

thanx for the input

theta: i didn't notice that ... thanx

Bracer: ur comment about the fingers is cool and understandable.
but excuse my poor english

i didn't understand anything above it

and ofcourse i didn't understand ur "Silly" question
Whats With The Tip Over ? Does It Help In Rigging ?

wt do u mean by solid and bubble Meshsmooth?????

[McElroy Boy]

Originally posted by nadeemmar
thanx for the input

theta: i didn't notice that ... thanx

Bracer: ur comment about the fingers is cool and understandable.
but excuse my poor english

i didn't understand anything above it

and ofcourse i didn't understand ur "Silly" question


wt do u mean by solid and bubble Meshsmooth?????

He means why do you have your character leaning forward like he is in the side view.

[nadeemmar]

aaaah :o
i thought he was talking about the last image:o
actually i fixed that time ago:)
its my fault that i didn't post more views

thanx McElroy Boy

[Bracer]

nadeemmar It May Bot Be Your Fault, Its Not Like I Have Perfect English. Ha Ha Ha