character concepts

[hand]

Hi everyone here,

I am starting to develop a game idea as a hobby project. To keep things simple there will be only 2 characters and some inanimate objects for now. Here are the rough designs for the two characters. the fat guy is a farmer who used to be a soldier and the younger fellow is training to be a warrior. the game will be set in the dark ages. PLease give me some constructive criticism to help me out.

thanks

[robberthesp]

maybe you nshould give the fat guy really old and dull weapons, half broke en stuff.
Try to do something about the other guy.
Make him original. You see those kinda characters EVERYWHERE!

[geoMan]

nice idea....... i guess the drawings suit the low poly patch topology of your figures....good luck with you game and dont forget to post the name!