Lord Of The Rings...

[brodden]

Hello!!!
This is my latest work.. i am 17 years old and began my 3d modelling career for only 6 month ago... I now whant to submit this picure so that you can tell me what you think about it!

I hope i dont insult you by submiting this picture among such great pictures i see daily on this forum!!! I am still a newbie...

[Daniel]

It's cool, although the lor thing has been way overdone, you've achieved some nice composition and rendering. You should add more detail though, the shapes are too primitive. The ring looks like a torus.

[brodden]

Thx for your opinion... the main goal with this picture was to make realistic material. The shapes are very primitive i agree. I made them in 1 h.
I would like to see the picture as a wallpaer or something.. maybe as advertisement.. that is why i put so many rings in the same picture..

I would appriciate if more people could give thir opinions...

[legato]

well first of all..the dagger is not sharp..looks like plastic..sharpen the edges so it looks like it can chop off someone's head...
another thing is the ring it self...since u said the aim of this render is to make realistic materials..try using hdri for the reflection of the ring...theres some tutotials on it but i cant remember...

[Presarc]

If you want to post a more convincing ring without spending too much time, make a tube instead of a torus, the sides are flat much like a ring's are. If you wish you can just make it an Editable Mesh/Poly and just mess with it as you wish.

Have fun,

Jon