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arreal
30-12-2003, 02:31 PM
I start my second character,now I finished head,body still in progress.c&c please,modeled in 3dmax3.0
arreal
30-12-2003, 02:33 PM
front
arreal
30-12-2003, 02:38 PM
side
ColeKindred
30-12-2003, 03:19 PM
I like the form of the head alot. She looks young is that what your going for? One thing that might improve the structure imo is if you made the brow line and the line under the eye less harsh. Then again that might be the look you want. Really nice start.
SAPPER POPOV
30-12-2003, 03:32 PM
nice modelling !
( why max 3.0 when there is excellent 5.0 ? 5.1 ? or 6 !!! ) lol
I like this shape , i like the nose :)
I think left view is a little alien style , cause the shape of head is a little square and she has a too big skull .
the ear attachement to the head has a problem too .
Wherever , good job ! nice modelling ! :)
looks great! some crits from me.... the ear looks messy, not nearly as smooth as the rest of th emesh, and you need to bring back some of the verts of the eye. Other than that, it looks very clean and smooth, nice work! :D
arreal
31-12-2003, 08:59 AM
thanks every one, i use 4.0 just for animation,because my machine is not every powerful,pIII667.All I use is just poly modeling,so I think model in 3.0 is enough to me now.
And it's my first time to model a detail ear then attached to the head,can some tell me or post a wire how to do it correctly?
About the side,Alien head?Maybe she is a clever girl:),I will fix it and the eye problem.
PS:HAPPY NEW YEAR!
SAPPER POPOV
31-12-2003, 10:06 AM
Originally posted by arreal
And it's my first time to model a detail ear then attached to the head,can some tell me or post a wire how to do it correctly?
i think u could look at my wip " woman face here :) " at page 2 n 3 , i have a lot of problem with ear , and step by step , i have obtain a very very nice ear ( imo :) ) .
the only way are anatomy book :)
ps : u're model is really nice ! i like , she has this little thing who make me seems she's alive . a very good beginning
arreal
31-12-2003, 02:38 PM
Thank you,SAPPER POPOV.I'll check it out.
And I modified the head.
arreal
31-12-2003, 02:41 PM
And here's the body which still in progress.
arreal
31-12-2003, 02:45 PM
body back
chaos_seed
31-12-2003, 03:08 PM
yeah there is still work to do on the body the head looks fine mybe we could dee a wire just to check a few things...
Last head render seemed a bit boxy maybe it's just the view...
keep it up and happy new year everyone !
arreal
01-01-2004, 01:22 AM
I modified head,now it seens more round
arreal
01-01-2004, 01:26 AM
add some detail to the body
Shadowhunter Da
01-01-2004, 01:50 AM
I'm no pro modeler, it looks really good, but here are my critiques...
1. It may just be the angle, but the arm looks bent backwards too much.
2. Looks like saggy breasts instead of shoulder blades.
3. The butt looks flat, but may be the angle of the shot.
Shadowhunter Da
01-01-2004, 01:53 AM
4. There looks to be a slight raise here and looks weird. Like a risen scar.
5. A bit opposite of 4, it may be the shadow but it looks as if there is a dip in the cheek there.
6. The ear looks nice, but I don't think the inner ear part looks like the inners of an ear.
arreal
01-01-2004, 07:20 AM
Many thanks Shadowhunter Da,it seemly it still has many mesh problem,I'll fix it.About ear,I just image it's sharp,completely wrong,try making a new one.
arreal
01-01-2004, 12:05 PM
I made the face map,just test.Add eye lesh(I don't know whether it's right or not)
sys0p
01-01-2004, 12:15 PM
looking good. the ears could do with a bit more work. otherwise it looks good.the texture is a bit blurred around the lips, i know its a test but try to sharpen that. the scapula is a bit odd, try to make it less stuckout :D otherwise great work.
arreal
14-01-2004, 01:48 PM
fixed some mesh problem,attach the head.c&c please
arreal
15-01-2004, 01:48 PM
HELP,HOW TO MAKE REALISTIC HAIR IN 3D?
arreal
27-01-2004, 09:56 PM
add some texture to hair.I think it looks better than before.
arreal
04-02-2004, 03:57 AM
update
neiy0
04-02-2004, 05:24 PM
hey looks great so far, except the ears..i know they are a bizatch to model, so heres a reference if need be..
good luck;) and nice job so far.. what the nipples sticking out of the shirt??
neiy0
04-02-2004, 05:25 PM
sorry heres the ear pics
arreal
05-02-2004, 04:08 AM
neiy0,Many thanks for the reference,I'm working on it,but still have problems,good luck to myself.
nipples sticking out of the shirt??Shame,sorry.
arreal
22-02-2004, 03:35 AM
update,attached hand to the body,c&c please
rubberduck
22-02-2004, 04:17 AM
Very nice modeling! About an ear tutorial, there should be one or two here http://www.3dtotal.com
arreal
27-03-2004, 10:47 PM
update,chinese style
arreal
27-03-2004, 10:54 PM
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Corth
28-03-2004, 07:17 AM
It looks to me like her elbows are bending in an impossible way (unless of course, they were broken :( ). In order for them to bend that way you would have to rotate the bicep and tricep area so that the elbow was pointing down.
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