W.I.P Slayer

[rjsmal]

What's up everybody long time.
here is a new character that i'm making named slayer so hope you like it heads finished need texture and comment's are welcome.
peace

[rjsmal]

or is this one better?

[LOUcifer]

Cool character! Can we see a wire? I do have one crit though, it looks as if the linework on the sides of the face form heart shapes. I assume that wasn't intentional. Very good start, Can't wait for another update!

[Holo]

But IMO the spikes are a bit over the top, and the patterns on the chest could use more attention.

btw..are u using Lightwave ?

[T0XIC]

yeah the spikes are a bit much, but it's very nice in general- Can we get a profile view?

[rjsmal]

thanks for the comment but if i understand it correctly the spike's are to much.

@ loucifer
here is the wire and i'm going to change the heart shape because i didn't notice it in the beginn so thnx for the comment.

@holo-3dt
i don't use lightwave but cinema 4d but a question did you like the one with out spike's better or do you mean that there are too much spike's >?<

@ toxic
thnx fot the comment maybe it's gonna sound dom but mmmm what is a profile view :$ ????

peace

[rjsmal]

Wire

[MonteCristo]

Yeah I must say that I agree with Holo on this, the spikes are a bit OTT. I think it's because the head looks so sleak and areodynamic, and the multitude of spikes seem to work against that visual language. I recommend rethinking them and perhaps designing them to work with the rest of the head than against it. But hey bro, it's your thing, there aren't any rules. Do as you think best. :D

[rjsmal]

@MonteCristo-3DT

your right it's my thing but i think it's important to lissen to other people like your self.
and i was thinking, y'all didn't like the spike's so i went looking for something nicer and i got a idea and that's thanks to y'all so that's why it's important to lissen to other people so thnx for the comment ;)

peace

p.s let me know if you got a idea because 2 minds are greater than one

[rjsmal]

a small update this is the areodynamic version with out spike's
so how is this version better.
peace.

[T0XIC]

@ toxic
thnx fot the comment maybe it's gonna sound dom but mmmm what is a profile view :$ ????

It's a side view- not at angle, but straight in from the side ;) And already I can see some stuff on that halfway view that wasnt clear before... for example, he doesn't have much of a nose :p

[MonteCristo]

Yeah I'm liking that a lot better, it's a lot subtler. Very Guyver. :D

[rjsmal]

@T0XIC
i didn't want to give it a nois but i did give it a bump at the point where the nois should be so it's a litter bigger.

@MonteCristo-3DT
thnx for the comment i think it looks better to but i made it look a little like guyver but i didn't want to make it a real guyver but some aspect of guyver are in it :)

peace

[rjsmal]

here is a color test so wich one is the best the color and with or with out reflection ??

peace

[Incitatus]

noooo

pls make a nice dark scaly skin for him, the model deserves it :)

[Cracadoo]

I like black one with reflections most... But Incitatus is right, make him bump texture at least.

[FireJin3]

The black and white one are my favorite, I would add some metal chrome or something like that, cuz now his looking like one of the Alien creatures.

[Holo]

something like this....maybe ?

[rubberduck]

Originally posted by MonteCristo-3DT
Yeah I'm liking that a lot better, it's a lot subtler. Very Guyver. :D

I agree too;)

[rjsmal]

every body thnx for taking the time to say wich one is your favoriet.

@Incitatus what kind of body do you got in mind let me see a pic or a preview

@Cracadoo
i'm gonna see what i can do with the bump so give me a preview if you want.

@Holo-3DT
i think till now your idea is the best so i think i'm going to make it like that with reflection .

@rubberduck
guyver is the S*** so that's why it looks a little like guyver.

but this question is for everybody how care's shall i make a body or leave it like this???

peace

[Cracadoo]

Make a body, man. I dont have time right now, but i will draw
something over pict of yours.

[rjsmal]

4 sho than when you hook me up ill see what i can do man

peace

[rjsmal]

o yeah this is just a new slayer version still working on it named slayer-x.

C&C please :D

peace

[rjsmal]

this is the slayer killer.
named kiyer

[rjsmal]

so no body like's them to bad but still working on them so soon to come (update slayer-x)

[rjsmal]

a little story and a update.

[rjsmal]

a little story again and the newest character prayer

[rjsmal]

last one for today

[Cracadoo]

Here is the pict. I thought to make somepthing like tihs over entire head but i was not in the mood. Anyway you can see what i have ment.

[rjsmal]

that's some thight s*** man i'll see what i can do as you can see i'm making more characters so if you want to add something on one of them be my geust because i like what you did man 4 real

peeeeeeeeeeeeaceeeeeee

[Goj]

Really nice design. I really like it. Keep it up. :Dd

[rjsmal]

here's another character that is a enemy of slayer his name is beyer or better told there name because it's like a sworm of bee warriors still working on it so it's very w.i.p 5 min work


a little more information i wanted to make a animation but now i got a better idea i'm going to make a comic book version of it with text and pic's of the warriors fighting is that a good idea it's something new so holla.

peace

[rjsmal]

small beyer update the back area is gonna act like a weapon and a wings to fly with

peace

[Jason-Lavoie]

You know what, i like the idea, but everything basically llooks the same dude, sry

[rjsmal]

what do you mean about that because i don't see the same if you can tell me what you think looks the same then maybe i can see it too ;)

peace

[Cracadoo]

Dont see any bumps yet. You could send me unwarpwed uwv map pict so i could play with it (if you want). Ok keep working...

[Jason-Lavoie]

Well your designd ude, like everything looks the same, ash the same concept, if you can't see it... then your blind (not to be mean) its just REALLY boring...

[rjsmal]

@ Jason-Lavoie

you know why you think it's all the same because you can only see the head now maybe that's why hahah but don't worry when it's finished maybe you will have a different upinion.

@Cracadoo
i'll hook you up as soon as possible because i'm very busy now with work and S*** so but i'll hook you up.

peace

[Jason-Lavoie]

Yeah i guess we will see... i still think its the same dude, i mean just look ta the face, you barly chnaged anything for your "bad guys" change or somthing... cause to me its just the same thing with a new body...

[rjsmal]

Jason-Lavoie
give me some idea's then i'll see what i can do oke.

peace

[rjsmal]

beyer is ready need some texture but the character is ready here it is
the back side is like a wing but when i put some bones in it ill load some positions up
peace

[Downup]

Wow thats alot meshsmooth :)

If u build a robot should it be boxy ust me who think crazy..

I can see that u have a nice idè of a Slayer :D

Keep going

[rjsmal]

thnx for the comment hahaha i think that a robot should be how you wanted boxy or very smooth like a human.
come back some time's to see the final result of all the character

peace

[Bracer]

This Head is Damn Cool Lor...

[rjsmal]

@Bracer
thnx for the comment man but wich head do you mean ???

peace

[Corky13]

something abaut the head (the very first one) i think it looks great but it seems that you made it just by extruding edges of a Box or a cube......just want to say....btw i like it a lot ;)

But the Bodys are weird o_O sorry to say that but maybe you should try to make something mor "humanoid" or use a reference for it.....

[Jason-Lavoie]

I tihnk all the heads look the same, i can't realy help yuo dude because i have no lcue where your going with this project, just looks like you used the asme head, made some spikes, and made the body, and that body you have there, although cool, its just WAY off balance, i mean you have some spike things in the back, and then some WEAK legs... come on dude, you have to make it better... more bigger... HAZAA

[Downup]

Originally posted by rjsmal
here is a color test so wich one is the best the color and with or with out reflection ??

peace

Damn the black one with raytrace lookes awsome:p

[rjsmal]

@Corky13

i'm working on the body's of the slayer and that will be a body just like the one from guyver.

@Jason-Lavoie
to bad you don't like it.

@IDownupI
:)

[Corky13]

I have to agree with IDownupI ... the black reflecting ROCKS ;)
btw...how do you done that material ? and which render do you use ?

[rjsmal]

it's just a black texture with full reflection i use cinema 4d to model and render

peace

[FlamingSuxor]

hmmmm...im gonna hafto agree with Jason-Lavoie on this...i do like the models...top notch...but i think theyre all quite similar (the heads obviously)...maybe its kaus they all have red eyes spikes and are gunmetal grey at the moment...maybe with some textures and crap theyll look different...but yeah...they do look a bit the same-ish

[rjsmal]

@FlamingSuxor

you know what i think is funny you both are saying that they look the same but the first one slayer is the first model that i made the second one slayer-x is just a upgrade so version 2 and prayer is a mix of those both but you will see what i mean when i'm ready with everything.
but for now y'all have to do it with the same heads :P

peace

[rjsmal]

the body of slayer but i'm still working on it this took me 15 minutes and i used point modeling don't expect to much because this is just the beginning and i'm working on this character on work thats why i cant make it at once.

peace

[Bracer]

erm, Point Modelling ?

[rjsmal]

@bracer
what i mean with point modeling is when you connect points to make a poly ;)

and here's a new character twista the killer also a enemy of slayer and slayer-x

[Cracadoo]

Hey you boy are gong better... i reely like twista the killer.
Q: why dont ou finish one caracter first and then move on the other?

[rjsmal]

@ Cracadoo

thnx for the comment i don't finish a character until i have all the head finished and now i'm finished with all the heads so the body's are up next.

a update of twista the killer need to work more on the hands because i didn't pay attention on them.

[rjsmal]

twista the killer is finished

peace

[Bracer]

How Is He Going To Destroy With That Kind Of Leg..........err.........Can He Jump ?

Can He Travel On Rocky Roads ?

Killer Needs To Be Agile You Know.

heh

If You Hate What I Just Said, Forget That I Typed.
heh

[nico3d]

I like the one in the second post. I like lots of spikes

[rjsmal]

@ Bracer
he can fly so that's his agile point and i don't hate what you said it's a good qeustion. :)

@nico3d
maybe i'm gonna make it transform in a slayer with a lots of spike's ;)

peace

[rjsmal]

this is the weapon of twista the killer but it's not finished yet it's gonna to be attached on the back or shoulder maybe 2 but i'll see
i can't make every thing now because i'm busy with work.

peace

[rjsmal]

small update with the weapon on his back

peace

[MrArmless]

ok, concerning that last one, I think it's the best of the bunch... but that guy will be in for some back therapy in it's old age.. :roll: that and it's a good thing he can fly because it looks like the spikes near the wheels (which don't seem to fit there for some reason) would be keeping your fella from going anywhere as they seem to go farther than the wheels themselves.

[rjsmal]

thnx for the crits i think i'm gonna give this guy leggs that would look better so more still to come
peace

[nico3d]

wowww, that is actually a WEAPON!! haha

but will he be able to hold back the propulsion effect, having those wheels he will end up rolling to hell !

[geoMan]

very good stuff....man! u have developed a whole "slayer" race :eek:

[rjsmal]

@nico3d

he's gonna get leggs so then we will see what the effect will be

@ geoman
thnx for the comment much more to come so stay tuned

peace

[shaneb]

I have been following this thread for some time now and I really think that the best advice I can give you is to work on one model and finish it. By continuously starting new models you are risking making the same mistakes with each. If you take one model from modelling through to texturing, rigging and animation you will find out some problems with your modelling and design....you can then take these problems into account for the next model and not make the same mistakes.

For instance if you rigged and tried to pose your latest model you would find that his movement would be quite restrictive. Many of your designs have spikes that would restrict movement to only a few degrees in some directions.

You have undertaken a huge project here and the advice I have offered here is so that you dont spend a lot more time on this before you find that the models are going to be difficult, if not impossible to rig and animate.

Hope this makes sense... I am only trying to help here....good luck.:D

[rjsmal]

@shaneb
thnx for the help it's tru what your saying next time i'm gonna make 1 thing at a time .
but we'll see what the final result will be this is just for fun so i'll keep going on the only thing what can happen is that i learn more about 3d and if it doesn't work out then yet i learnd somenew things ;)


but thnx for the help man
peace

[McElroy Boy]

Originally posted by rjsmal
small update with the weapon on his back

peace

I Like Twista but I'm not really feelin the wheels for feet. Maybe you could post him with some regular feet to get a contrast?

[rjsmal]

thnx mcelroy i'll make some feets i was thinking of it but didn't have time but now i have a lot of time ;)

peace

[jdgill]

Black and Silver reflection combined would look good.

[rjsmal]

i also like the black one :) so black it will be :)

[jdgill]

cool

[rjsmal]

:D

[jdgill]

I can't wait ot see it.