character : consuela

[e_reality]

this is my first post here, so .... hello to everyone.
this model is my first complete character, her name is consuela.
c&c are welcome for improving the model ....

[CountZero]

Hello there, overall it's pretty good, keep up the work. The head looks a little better than the body though, especially the hands, arms and chest need more work IMO.

[Cracadoo]

Hey, welcome. It is wery good model since it's first one. The armes are too fat and biceps are wrong shaped. The hands are too small also. There is somepthing with chest that seems wrong (i beleve it is too wide on Y axis). Keep up:!!!:

[j_mac]

that looks very cool at this point. can you hook up the wire frame and maybe some other views.?

cheers

[FireJin3]

When most people model the female chest, it alwasys looks like the have wrong placed implants.

[RodrigoRosa]

indeed the hands need some work... and the biceps do seems a little weird... can you put your model in a different position??

keep us up....

[e_reality]

thanks for the comments, guys .... they were very constructive .
i shall remodel those areas with problems ....see u soon with updates.
for now,wires and screenshots with this character can be found here :

http://www.geocities.com/fane_stinga/the_consuela_project/the_consuela_project.html

[Profane]

oh my god she has an enormous breast!

[rubberduck]

Originally posted by CountZero
Hello there, overall it's pretty good, keep up the work. The head looks a little better than the body though, especially the hands, arms and chest need more work IMO.

I agree and is it just me or is one breast bigger than the other?

[Daniel]

yeah the body needs work, kinda looks like an inflatable doll

[e_reality]

a little update .... i have made the chest smaller and done some minor modifications on the arm ....
now i know that i have some problems with the hand, but i don't realize what shall i modify there .... maybe the proportions of the hand compared with the arm ? if u can help me with some suggestions,pls .....

for larger images, see my web page.

[e_reality]

and another shot ...

[LOUcifer]

The hands look small(legnth wise). And there is not much in terms of shape diffrence between the hand and the arm/wrist. The hand should be roughly as long as her face( chin to about the hairline) You are doung well though.

[e_reality]

here's a little update .... i have modified the shape of the body and worked the proportions ....

[lilCara]

proportiile sunt total gresite, sanii prea mari, lasati si departati unul de altul, mainile cam scurte, soldurile prea mici, si talpile par cam scurte, corpul cam prea mare in comparatie cu picioarele, etc. Plus texturarea aproape inexistenta... Incearca www.fineart.sk sau www.3d.sk pt imagini folositoare.

Oh, and this is a very subjective opinion: change the name.

[e_reality]

damn ! o sa mai lucrez la afurisitele de proportii .... se vede treaba ca e mai greu dacat pare ! de texturat pielea nu aveam de gand sa ma apuc in curand .
anyway, thx lilCara :) !