indoor scene

[mvotre]

the render is a bit messed. cos im a noobie at lightning and texturing. dont care about some crazy colors...

[Thahackboy]

image.... lol:p

[mvotre]

:o :o my net sometimes act strange....

[Rinne]

Hehe, yeah, lighting and texturing could be better:D

but I like the modelling, it looks very good, but the grain is..........................heavy!!!

[3Dan]

Why is the TV blocking the window?
Why those magenta/lemon objects?
Why so much grainy?

All good questions...

[mvotre]

why the tv is in front of the window??? dont know.... i made this scene with a photo reference. i will try to find the owner of the photo and ask him..:D

magenta/lemon objects. i put diferent colors to objects just to see it better in my first renders (to fix size, position,etc) since the colors are set on rgb sliders, i just throw the sliders from side to side, wich gave me those funky colors.

the grain. came from the raytracer. i make these renders at work,
and it can render really slow if you are using illustrator, photoshop and golive at the same time. tomorrow i will post a small update in materials, and will try to remove some grain.

but this is what i want to hear. crits!! thanks dudes

[claWda]

actually, placing the TV in front of the window is a good way to avoid reflection when watching in daylight, and no, the viewer won't get blended

which leaves us to the actual scene, WHYWHYWHY do you combine real textures with purple, yellow and turqoius?? it's not funky, it's a disaster

[Androgs]

Dude, modelling are good, texturing, lighting plus rendering need some serious work:) .

[mvotre]

thanks dudes. thats why i come to threedy. to improve my work. im rendering a new shot, whit almost right objects colors (no more pink and lemon !!:D :D ) but i will need to paint some textures, and im thinking of placing some others things in scene.
can you help me?

i need ideas for objects (i was thinking of a glass table and a rug in front of the tv) what you think??

i need some reference to made the sofa textures. do you have some??

[mvotre]

small update. need to fix lots of materials and lightning. but im posting it cos i need some fabric (???) textures for the sofa.
anyone got some?? thanks!!

[claWda]

need to fix lots of materials and lightning

okay, just pointing out what bothers me in case you've missed something yourself

yours truly
claWda