New Work-3

[MHD]

http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/1_WireFream.jpg
http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/3_WireFream.jpg
http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/5_WireFream.jpg
http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/6_WireFream.jpg
http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/8_WireFream.jpg

[tejani]

hi mhd
great work
the hands need more details

[mat]

nice model so far man, but i must disagree with tejani, i wouldnt worry about the detail i would be more worrired about the skinnyness of them. they need to be more chunky like the rest of the body

the head is very cool but i dont think i like the nose, something isnt quite right about it, when i know details i will tell you

mat

[mat]

and give him some eyes, this max guru came to my school and said that as soon as possiable put eyes in your character, cause then you start to feel stuff for him/her straight away

mat

[MHD]

hi tejni, hi mat, i want to thank u for ur reply, i am a new used in max, i can create the model by some help form u and the other friends and i will try my best to give a better show on the hands>>>but the materialits prob.
and i dot understand u mat >about the guru .

[Daniel]

*edit*
uhm, if anyone read what was here, that wasn't me, my stupid roomate posted and didn't think to change the user name.

so uhm yeah, the char isn't bad, but I would work out some of the proportions, keep it up.

[mat]

hey MHD, all i meant was that you should put eyeballs in your character as soon as the eye sockets are made (and texture them with a simple eye map). Because the eyes are such an expressive part of the character, they will give the character emotions and will start to look more "real"

just try it, stick some spheres in the eye sockets and you should notice a big change in how the character feels (if you dont notice any change then tell me and i wont recommend it to anyone again

keep pushing man

mat

[FrodoBaggins]

This guy made me laugh.. :)

Looks nice sofar.. But I think he may look cool with a bit larger hands, those would fit better with his (stupid/not smart) head...

-FB

[MHD]

thnkx fo all
thnkx DanielB >
i thnk the char is bad >>> i am sory >

its update for char.
http://www.alsr7.com/upload/files/jpg/mhd20040317.jpg