swordfish

[el_crni]

hi guys

here is my own design of a car,

so, what do u thing,

it is not finished yet, i need sugestions

[el_crni]

Few days of work and here I am :)

[kkez]

nice! other views?

where is the door? :)

[Qubical]

Well, I don't see a difference between the first and the second image, I also think that you should work on the overall design a bit more. Youre design is lacking some clear lines. right now it just looks like a bunch of shiny painted metal with wheels. Sorry if this was harsh, but I think you should work on the design some more. Did you do any sketches before you started? If so please show the as well so we can see what you are going for. If I have some more time later I will draw some lines into your image to illustrate how you could improve it if you don't mind.
Qubical

[el_crni]

well thanks a lot i appriciate all of your comments, at the and i was post my work for that, also i need sugestions couse i learning modeling...
thanks guys

[kribz]

is the car going to be a one person vehicle?....if not i think u should change the doors...it seems to as if the doors a curved inwards there wont be much space to sit in...the rest i think looks really good:)
/kribz

[el_crni]

car is designed for one person, but i'm a beginer so i had a little problems modeling exactc functional doors

[g69]

i wish i had such car :D
looks nice...

yes please show us more views when you are done
with modeling :)

keep up the good work man!
L8er

[el_crni]

i'm working on a side elements, trying to create doors, anyhow it will be done soon

thanks

[memphis]

That's hilariously awesome! It looks like such a pimpin' car... hell, I'd drive it if it existed.

[Goig!]

In the second image, the front bumper is too low, that car couldn´t take a slope! :eek:

[el_crni]

hi,
i started modeling second car for some contest, it originli design, but it is just starting, i'm modeling two car at the same time...
any coments and help are velcome....
its internal contest between couple of my frineds


thanks

[el_crni]

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