First try on a head (wip)

[fengclaw]

HI everyone , i am using currently maya 5.0 and this is my first try modeling a head or anything organic.

I took this pics in opengl because i still gotcha work on light so that i get a decent picture. C & C are very welcome.
Post scriptum : Tell me , what i can do better so that i can improve myself .

so here the pics

[fengclaw]

here a smoothed version.

[MrArmless]

Hi Feng! Well, I'll tell you what I see but I'm pretty much a beginner myself. First off, triangles are evil, in the long run you should try to do away with them so you have only quads (4-sided poly's) remaining. Also, you should check into edgeloops, although you have some around the mouth they aren't placed correctly, they should end up a bit above the nostrils. That will help you create facial expressions. starting from the side of the face, the face is too "forward". I guess the best thing you could do is have a look at the Michel Roger tut on this site, it's been overdone but it's a good tutorial. Good luck!