character head w.i.p

[NoJo]

here's my latest work... I need c&c so I can make this character better.... Hope you'll like it :D

[Dedalo]

Nice start , keep working.

[MrArmless]

indeed, post some more :) will this be a character for animation?

[Downup]

I would find him more fun with a fat and short nose :roll:

[NoJo]

Dedalo : Thanks for your comment man.
MrArmless : Thanks, And yes, hopefully there will be an animation :)
IDownupI : Thank you, I'll give it a try :D

Updates will be posted soon.

[NoJo]

this is for you IDownupI. Personally I like the other version better though...

[NoJo]

hehe, I read wrong and made his whole face fat... anyway, here's an update on the small face. Give me some C&C

[NoJo]

updates. I really need your comments guys and girls, here is the image :) :

[NoJo]

And another image :

[NoJo]

No updates yet since I haven't got any time yet to work on it, and I need your comments! My treads allways has an ability to die but I don't want this to die:ugh:
Well, updates will come soon....

[hpslashluvr]

Hehe, well, posts only die when you stop updating. I know what you mean though, it's hard to keep going when no one bothers to crit. If you post too often just asking for crits, ppl will be turned off and stop reading your thread. I got this problem too, haha look how many times I've posted on my own thread.

Can you post a close up of the ears? They look really strange on the inside. I think the reason why ppl said the nose looked better short is because the character resembles a person too much. Maybe if you extended the ears just a bit and made the nose a smudge wider (although just as long as they are now) the image would be more pleasing to the eye. Post wires too, and updates. :dance: Did you use the Harry Potter elf tutorial (I think it's on Kreacher)? Looks rather like him.

[NoJo]

Thanks for your comment, I got the insperation from the kreacher tutorial but then I modeled it on my own without following the tut. Here's a close up on the ear and wires ;)http://medlem.spray.se/thenojonr1/closeupear_perspShape_tmp.jpg http://medlem.spray.se/thenojonr1/wire1.jpg http://medlem.spray.se/thenojonr1/wire2.jpg

[hpslashluvr]

The ear looks really jaggedy where the ridges/edges are, maybe clean that up a bit. Otherwise I think this character is really cool...are you going to clothe him? and is the rest of him going to look human?