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[el_crni]

hi,
i started modeling second car for some contest, it originli design, but it is just starting, i'm modeling two car at the same time...
any coments and help are velcome....
its internal contest between couple of my frineds


thanks

[el_crni]

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[keescopyright]

your english is kinda hard, and it seems you dont need any help at all..

[el_crni]

some steps later!

[el_crni]

i made a few changes,,,

coments!!!!!

[Psistorm]

I really like the changes you made, it looks a lot better now, imo :)
cant wait to see more :D

[splint]

A very nice model and an interesting modeling stile. I am excited to see the final product.

A few nitpicks though, the a-pillars look weird. The way it terminates and meets with the door and fender catches the eye. The model is so early though, that without a hood line it’s hard to tell what’s going on.

Also, the smooth and well integrated fender flairs in the first two renders is now reminiscent of those cheap lick-and-stick ones off a mid 90’s corvette grand sport or a badly done tuner mod.

All I all, however, the car has a nice shape and good proportions.

[antoine]

I like it dog, i couldnt design that

[el_crni]

I made a few changes and a lot of a work is left ...

Comments!!!

[el_crni]

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[Jason-Lavoie]

That so cool dude,ncei and low, very sweet!

[el_crni]

Rims are added with Photoshop just to see how it looks.

[el_crni]

More details :)

[g69]

this is look really cool!!!
specially the rims you added wiv ps looks amazing!

keep it up man...
me myself lookin forward for the final render :D

[el_crni]

g96: modeling will be soon finished so i'm looking forward for texturing...
i'm not sure what colour will be just fine but what ever... now i modeling rims so...

thanks for coments!!! apriciate

[Jason-Lavoie]

OMG thats beautiful!!!! JEEZE, i love how small and big ti is at the same time, my kinda style, i love you. By any chance to you make concept cars... lol

[el_crni]

jason lavoie: thanks for the comments, car is my original design for the internal contest as i said before... i'm not sure am i so good to do contept car....


thanks

[g69]

Originally posted by el_crni
jason lavoie: thanks for the comments, car is my original design for the internal contest as i said before... i'm not sure am i so good to do contept car....


thanks

its no harm in trying :)
your doing a good job man... keep it up!
really lookin forward to this...

[el_crni]

thanks for showing interest for my work i really appriciate all of your comments....

be patient for final render i hope it'll be soon

[el_crni]

I NEED HELP HERE.....

i tryed to make metal for the rims but after all they are not good enough, now they have standard max mat,

any sugestion is wlcome

thanks

[el_crni]

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[Climbazise]

Hey, amzing way of modeling, cool cardesign.
Wait for the continuing, good luck...............;)

[goose]

hi
look at ma wip car
if you like my paint on the wheels i will explain it to you

http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=16724

[el_crni]

after working on rims material...
its not godd but i'll keep working

[el_crni]

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[goose]

looks not bad , keep workin on it

if you want i will rite a small tut how to make it, takes some time...

[el_crni]

it woud be great, just a short line


thanks

[goose]

i put some pics in my threat, i think it better than explain it per words;-)

[el_crni]

ok here it is, rims are done, i cant try any more.... i put also some new reflections to the car body

[el_crni]

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[el_crni]

some lights

[g69]

oh my! the materials on rim makes the car look really really good!
it really punches it out!

my only critic is that, why is the car sooooooooooo low?
i dont thinkso it will be able to move, will it?

it will touch the road, ground or wateva...and would
ruin itself :( that would hurt :(

anyways i really enjoy watching your car man
keep it up!!!
waiting for more updates! :)

[el_crni]

thanks for comments, more updates will be soon....

[el_crni]

a few details on front side

g69: the car is too low yes but im gonna lift it up later dont worry:D

[el_crni]

nemas pojma!
al ti je lepa kera.
:o

[el_crni]

car is lifted up, i think thats enough
:)

[Ninto]

Wow, it has gone trough many improvements since the first post. My only suggestion would be that the windows on the side should be splitted by someting, not just a seam,

Sorry, I don't know how to explain in proper English ;)

[goose]

thanks for your commend!!!

you also doing a great job,i like your rims!!!!
do you also want to model the interieur

[el_crni]

hm its a bit hard, but i hope i'll be able to do that

thanks

[goose]

by the way, how did you model your rims, with spline modeling?

[claWda]

looks great, not a big fan of the entire glass roof though, but that's just me :) take care

[milosp]

I've just arrived with my Pontiac (in the WIP thread), he is still in a mess, but after some tuning...

(I posted here because I know you'll look on this thread before checking your e-mail)

[el_crni]

some changes...rims...

[el_crni]

as i said befor car is for internal competition with my ex roommate, the best roommate a man coud have, see his post.... his nick is "milosp"

[el_crni]

heres a wire

[figo]

nice car dude

[el_crni]

thanks for comments guys

[geoMan]

well....i can see that the car is coming out pretty well...obviously by the dramatic progress descending in the thread....
i dont really like one thing....it is that it has some really smooth edges...especially on the bonet.....u know.....they look like turbulence on the surface...not a design....

i wud luv it if u adjust that....

nicely coming out though...! do tell who won the contest!

[el_crni]

it will be done as soon as i find some free time

[el_crni]

im really love to hear your comments
thanks

[Almansur]

ce-s galmele alea de pe parbriz, din vederea plasa?

[grooveulas]

cool side profile.

[rockerx]

Crni, what's going on with your car? Excellent work, hope you finished it?

[mr_demon]

hey man, nice concept. u need to tidy it up though to make it look more realistic. try making the wheel arches wider and the nose more curved out frontwards

[el_crni]

yes car isnt finished yet becouse im too bussy with other thing....
as soon as i find more time i must do something with the rims...


thanks

[neiy0]

that's a tight car, awsome concept, it reminds me of the scion tc ..

i give it 5*'s for awsome concept and rad modelling:)

[el_crni]

well, thank guys....
this model was forgoten becouse of less free time...
but with your comments i decided to finish it.... im starting to work on this one....
prepare for a lot of changes:-):-):-)


THANKS FOR SUPORT

[rockerx]

Thanks God, you're working on it again :p

Well, I don't think that MANY changes will be that good :P

Just try to finish it, and we'll try to help you make it really the best :halo:

[Marcia]

Really a gorgeous model, nice design. My only concern would be the lack of ground clearance... with the low-pro tires and all, you'd have to hope the road/track was absolutely clear of obstacles, because the car's going to be really easy to damage.