I not the robber! I the NOBLE PIRATE.

[kariy]

I not the robber! I the NOBLE PIRATE.
I wait your comments.

[Cic]

Nice modeling! But he looks a bit gay, is taht the meaning? Rally nice textures anyways!

[kribz]

lol....haha...what kind of critique is that?...i think it´s a good pic..don´t listen to crappy critique like that..;)

[Ironbuket]

Pirate?

That chimney "thing" in the background needs smoothing, I can see the edges quite clearly

Its a good start anyway

[Cic]

Originally posted by kribz
lol....haha...what kind of critique is that?...i think it´s a good pic..don´t listen to crappy critique like that..;)

Well It looks like he wears makeup or something.. There is something wrong with the face texture!

[claWda]

looks like you took the image to photoshop and added contrast like crazy, am I right?

and yes he looks gay haha, but gay men have style so who cares

either way, the image has too much contrast, I mean, just look at the sky, it's not even blue anymore...and pirate??? what makes him a pirate? and what makes him noble?
you have failed there if your intention was making him a noble pirate...he looks more like a gay thug...but hey, it looks good, but don't think you can convince anyone that he's a pirate...peace

[Jason-Lavoie]

I have to say, and this si nto to offend you... ir ealyl do not like it. I mean the model is (my opionion) not the best in the world, a lot of work on that guy... and he background... it's to cluttered. And this picture just doesn't make sense at all... please tell me where your going with this.


Again i hate to be the person who say's this, but i think it had to be said. Keep on working on it please :)

[Ragnar]

BO-SELECTA!


lol ;)

[claWda]

hey Jason, he has a lot going for this image, great camera angle, the scene actually does make sense, only things that are wrong are lighting and the whole pirate thing, other than that, this is infact a good scene

[kariy]

Thanks for yours komentarii. This work can be considered, as experiment with color, yes it Fotoshop and max/If to speak about cosmetics on the person yes it probably how it is the pirate! Dissociation of personality and so on.
Forgive to me my English.

[Jason-Lavoie]

Thats ok dude, i am english and i can't spell worth crap (i can, but i rush typing) ha ha... well in my opinion... i just don't get it... i am lost :(

[secobb]

By pirate do you mean the butt kind? It looks like he just came out of that building after having his way with one of his "ship mates". I think you should ungayafy it a little.

[Malkavia]

LOL! had to reply to this cause it made me laugh my ass off when you said he looked gay... ok as stated that tower (whatever) thing in the background does need some smothing, personaly i dont like the over done contrast adjustion makes it all seem too bright... and why is he a pirate.. i picture pirates with parrots and peg legs... not a gay bald biker guy :D but i dont think anyone is putting down your modeling skills. so dont take that as a bad thing.

oh and be careful on your crits guys, i you dont like the pic then post some reasons why, exactly what you think should be changed, do just go 'ohh i hate it so you have to change it' make some good suggestions.. and if you just wanted to state that the guy looks like a butt pirate... maybe you shoulnt have wasted time and net space, be nice guys everyone here started somewhere and im sure you hate it when you get crappy forums posts just flaming your effort, so try to think before you post.

[Ironbuket]

This may be way off the mark, but for some reason I thought of this after kariy seemed to be saying that the make-up look was deliberate

Adam and the Ants - Stand and Deliver: Lyrics
I'm the dandy highwayman who you're too scared to mention
I spend my cash on looking flash and grabbing your attention
the devil take your stereo and your record collection! (oh-oh)
the way you look you'll qualify for next year's old age pension!

It just seemed that there was a link in there somewhere, with them both wearing makeup and saying “Im the…” as in karily’s title

[claWda]

Originally posted by secobb
By pirate do you mean the butt kind? It looks like he just came out of that building after having his way with one of his "ship mates". I think you should ungayafy it a little.

hahahaha, wtf!! :D

kariy must be a great artist, the more I look at this image, the more I like it, and the whole gay thing is genius, even if you didn't mean it...lol, mixed feelings for this one ;)

[toyo]

Hahaha....Bad image....of my good....:crazy:

[madmenno]

Nice one,

Where is his ship :d
Is it a modern pirate? I see a fence there and i don't think they had those in those ages.

I must also confirm he has a gay look, maybe you should change the eye glasses or a patch in front of his eye. And maybe give him something on his head. Also..... i think you should give him a darker skin becaus all those times on see colors your skin. And about the clothing i would choose some rags or something like that extravagant outfit of the picture Ironbuket attached.

I wouldn't dare to say i like him :d. But you did a good job on modeling him. I hope you change it some and post an update.

Greetz

Mad Menno

[Daniel]

rofl...

butt pirate...

you guys are nuts, but to crit the pic, I do find the guy needs a little more work, but I really like the environment and the camera angle. I really don't get the meaning of pirate though, the last thing he looks like is a pirate. and far be it for me to comment on his sexual orientation, it all depends on where your going with this.

[Cyrenn]

Well as for the pic. He does look alittle on the gay side. But you started something great here. Im being serious to. Maybe add more to the image. Like maybe a neon sign that says the Blue Oyster Club.

Another great idea would be to turn the scene into a night time scene instead of a day time scene.

And have him holding a beer bottle. Also make his sun glasses alittle like shades. Like ponch used to wear on chips. Otherwise it almost looks like he isn't wearing glasses. Just change the texture to a tinted black.

Thats just my opinion. You actually got something that seems to have cause people to notice it. I would play off that.

Don't take the crits as bad. Just use them to to enhance what you might have not notice you had.

Also some graffitte on the walls would enhance it some.

Keep up the good work.

Cyrenn

Heres a WIP I started.
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=16717

http://www.digitalvamp.com
http://www.transformersmovie.com

[Phynius Gauge]

Good job... he looks like a gay frenchmen though.

[Cyrenn]

This is a great thread. Had to revive it.:D It was on the last page on the last spot.

[Ironbuket]

Hmm, well it was a nice thought

Only... there is no "last page". Your "last page" is determined by your personal settings. I am guessing you probably have it set to show posts from the last 30days (which is the default, but they still exist after that. Just change your settings and you can see older posts too

[Cyrenn]

Thx Iron your right, I didn't realize that. See you always do learn something new everyday.:D

Cool now I can go back and see alot of art I missed before.

[nafi]

nice work