Female Character

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

Hi first post here. I think this model is gonna be more organic than inorganic, so, i posted it here.

next update: body's start+ some more details on neck and a ear.
Any C&C's would be great
(no shaderz yet, just modeling)
max 4.0 default scanline
**UPDATED VERSION**
new neck:
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_full1.jpg

the organic part of the body, rest gonna be inorganic:

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_body11.jpg

and the wire:

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_wirea.jpg

[MrArmless]

nice model, can't find much to crit on at the moment:!!!:

[Da3X]

Looks good so far! I like the models idea!

I think the eyes are a bit to small for the face... especially compared to the luscious lips! And you should fix the eyeballs position - there is a small gap in one view.

Keep going... will be an interesting thread!

[rubberduck]

Looks great sofar, just need to fix the gaps in the corner of the eyes;)

[Downup]

:!!!: Nice!!

Can u show a low poly wire on it?

[Phynius Gauge]

I like this model a lot. I agree with Da3x about the eyes. Otherwise its great :) .

[Dragonkiss]

Hi there,

just wanted to say that very nice, i like her mouth, can you post the wireframe, and what kind of modelling did you use? spline?
anyway good work, want to see more..bye

[Downup]

the lips are very good indeed.. Want low poly on them so i learn =)

[hpslashluvr]

Angelina Jolie as a mech warrior. Haven't seen that one yet. :p jk

Nice job, no crits beyond what everyone else has said.

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks the feedback. update

[Phynius Gauge]

Excellent stuff. The body is really nice. I think the forehead may be a little flat though. Otherwise no crits.

[Da3X]

The body is PERFECT! You've done a very good job on the body... perfect proportions - if you ask me! Awesome work!

I'd like it even more if you would append updates to the end. This gives everybody new to this thread the opportunity to see how the model evolved in the past and it makes it easier for us to see the improvements.

[IanSpendloff]

The body is great! Makes you wanna pinch it. (or is that just me?)

[Downup]

DDDDdamn u changed images.. Wow this is soo damn good!

[Phynius Gauge]

Could you post the wireframe of the body? :)

[NoJo]

The body looks perfect! nothing to crit at the moment.... just great work!

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks, next post I show some body wires:

another neck attempt ( I didn't like last one), and a dome light test ( I can only use default scanline, my pc sux):

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_gi.jpg

[Phynius Gauge]

Yeah, I liked the other neck, but this one looks great, especially with that metallic spinal cord. Good sh*t :) .

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

the wire of the body: no updates yet
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_wire_body.jpg

[luiz SUbunda]

Ae velho. . sinceramente. . gostei mais do pescoço android. .

mas um ou outro. . ambos estaum foda. . principalmente o corpo. . ta com um aspecto bem 'unico'

Traslanting - The 'android' neck kick a$$

Abraços :D

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

update: the arm

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/arm_shaded.jpg

[p0lym0rph]

verry nice start:)

[JHarford]

lovely work ,
similiar to others though.
are you entering cgtalk machineflesh competition with this?

[bullethead]

CGstripe...I belive he started this before the comp, so I dont belive he is.

Anyways though...its pretty badass...keep up the good work..nothing to crit except wishing that I could model like that.

[FrodoBaggins]

Nice, you covered the feminine (did I spell it correct??) shape pretty well!

LOL @ bullethead for f*cking up the layout... :p

[rubberduck]

Nice work;) You should enter cgtalk's machineflesh competition

[Downup]

Wow.....What is the concept for this one?:p

[Mr.T]

sweeeeeet geeez... she's the cyborg of my dream :D
great work!

have the same question, are you entering cgtalk machineflesh with this one? if yes, good luck/work ;)

edited: forget to mention.. somehow, it remembers me the cyborg in the magnificient videoclip: Bjork - Full of Love

[bullethead]

You guys obviously did not read what I wrote:roll: and yes I am the layout screwup guy. You can count on me to shift things over:D

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks. I'm not in the cgtalk's machineflesh competition. But I wish I could travel in time and start to model this after the start of the competition hehe.


update:
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/legsaaa.jpg

[Downup]

When will u do something wrong soo i can Complain :D:D:D

Soo damn cool character!!

[Phynius Gauge]

Give us more :) . I want to see an update. Oh and I just noticed that it would probably be hard for her to bend her arm very far, but you could widen that gap. I don't really know how to explain it better :p .

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

a little update (more coming soon, just to busy to complete that character):

http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_armzz.jpg

[[X]treme]

very cool, and also very clean mesh from what i can see

looking great so far

[Borg]

wow..nice model

waiting for updates:D

[Dragonkiss]

hello,
you know i was looking at your mesh, and i think, even if it look so perfect( because i think it very good, you know that) she wil have problem to flex her arms... , i mean to make a full flex, it wont be possible, anyway it's just a thought maybe you know that already...
see you later...

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

**update**
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/boss_ownz.jpg

[Dragonkiss]

What to say.....still perfect....

[Downup]

:cool: =) soo nice. But i know u know that :P

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

lil' update (just changed the image above)

[Warhawk]

Wow man . This is realy great modlel . She reminds me of Ghost in the sheel theme . A female cyborg . The modeling is just perfect and her face is very cute . It is hard to achive such great features . Keep it up . I want to see more .

[Scop-Man]

what can i say, wow comes to mind when i see it, the mesh is extraodinary, and the texture compliments it,

i must know how you made it!

[hells angel]

beautiful modellin....extraordinary texturing!!.....what more can i say.....waiting to see more.

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks, I'll update it soon.
I made it all in poly by poly way.

Photoshop 7.0 for the textures

and default scanline as render.

[Corth]

I can't find anything to crit, so :dance:

keep up the great work :)

[ryvick]

the face is very pretty
those lips so nicely done
the backbone merging with the skin is without a flaw
bravo

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

update:
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_proto.jpg

[hpslashluvr]

AWESOME. don't see too much of that quality on this forum. looks like she's been crying over something lately.:p

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks man, I need to adjust a lil' bit more the reflection map on the eye region of the face, still workin'.

I don't have to much free time for this one, but I'll keep it up

[Phynius Gauge]

She rocks dude keep it up :) .

[Da3X]

Very very good... it's breathtaking! Keep it up... doesn't matter how long it takes ;) My sparetime is also very limited - know what you mean...

[Nappa]

dont know if yo fix it but you can see the background if you look at the back of the neck in one of your renders

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

Originally posted by Nappa
dont know if yo fix it but you can see the background if you look at the back of the neck in one of your renders

Yep, but I don't wanna use solidify, cuz it double the mesh density, and I don't have a great PC hehe, so I'll just put 2-sided on my material to fix it.

Thanks for the observation

[Dragonkiss]

very nice i love the texture...she looks great, how did you do for eyes lash?

[Downup]

3 words

O M G


.... love it..

Do you not have a porfolio?

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks the feedback.

I don't have a portifolio yet, I think It's will be my first work for a portifolio. Most of my previous works was just unfinished WIP's.

the eyelashes r just modified cilinderz along the eye loop

[sarN]

Absolutely stunning my friend! I love the deep colors, they really bring out the full potential of the texture, I can't wait till youre done more!

[JDPCreations]

I'd love to know how you did the eyebrows and eyelashes, if you ever write a howto please post it.

Btw, I totally dig what you've done, you know what you're doing I'll give you that. ;)

[mr.Banana'S]

Hello there YaKuZa_BOSS! :wave:
First off all i'd like to say that your work is something!The body and the head look just perfect! Really great modelling...
And here is another thing i'd like to tell/ask...Since i'm not so good in modelling i want you to show some wires if you don't mind...You see, right now i'm modelling a woman too,but i'm using almost the same technics as in Joan of Arc (or something like that) tutorial and it gets me nowhere... I mean i'm doing pretty well now,but still there are many things that i would like to fix, but i have no idea how to do that...So what i'm trying to say is that it would be really great if you could show wires of back and front views...Yes i know that you've already done that,but it was preatty dark and cameras' positions (don't know exactly how to say it in english...hope you'll understand that...) weren't good too... (i mean they were OK that's for sure,but i couldn't see those parts where i've got problems) Ofcourse if you do mind shownig them that's fine with me,but i hope you are a really swell guy and show them... :o
Anyway...good luck to you,buddy ;)

[LesbianTaliban]

ho...lee...craaaaaaaaaaaaaaaap!

that is sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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[YaKuZa_BOSS]

the wireframe of the body:
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_prototype1_wire.jpg

and a lil' update:
http://www.angelfire.com/vamp/the_boss/cy_prototype1.jpg

[mr.Banana'S]

Hello there...
Hey,thanks YaKuZa_BOSS for posting those wires...really thanks...
And now about your model...Well, what can i say? This is the greatest woman model i've ever seen and i think a lot of people will agree with me...I definitely love her eyes...very realistic. :roll:
Well i guess that's it...Good luck once again.

[Jojomondag]

Hmm its stahlberg quality on this character it looks sooo awsome just whanted too say that now i will be quiet and just watch^^

[YaKuZa_BOSS]

thanks bro's, I'll update it soon