Fiat 500.. Karabo's Car Tut here...

[[r3D]]

Hi folks..

i got sick of starting conceptcars and never finishing them cuz they suck too much so i decided to do Karabo's tut (aswesome work karabo, Good Job man!!!). this thread will contain the stuff i make while progressin thru the tut.. comments are wanted, although not too much is yet there to crit :D

lata guys.. [r3D]

[[r3D]]

argh forgot pic.. and went to edit and i see i can't attatch anything :(

[Dr.N]

nice bro
finally posting smothing ...
good modeling

cya around man

[[r3D]]

heh...

as a wise guy once said
" Constructive criticism at its best! "

LOL

thanks for the comment bro..

cyazz.. [r3D]

[3Dan]

A bit too early to crit but looks like all polys are in place.
Just go on and keep us updated.
Try the meshsmooth modifier at 2 iterations.

[karabo]

Well so far there is really not much to crit. I don't see any problems so keep it going.

[novoAlias]

heh i was gonna ask if anyone had seen karabo around, and i think that quote was directed at me last time :roll: :p

anyway nice work so far, good tut - is there any more hints an stuff after the bit about making the headlight holes coz thats as far as i got b4 doing something else.. the tire tread is useful aswell...

[[r3D]]

Thanks for Comments/Crits people, i knew it was too early to crit but i just wanted to make this thread while i still had the power cuz otherwise i would just be too lazy and throw the model around. so this thread is kinda a way of making myself wake up and work...

anyhoo..
@ 3Dan-3DT : I had meshsmooth on but you wouldn't be able to crit without a wire right? lol so here's the 3 iteration version with a crappy material on one half,... but oh well :D...

[karabo]

don't get lazy, I want to see this one done

[Dr.N]

Post something dude:(

[[r3D]]

OK, time for updates.. been a lil' while, busy with school (and other stuff :roll: )

so here goes, hope it good, C&C please :D

[mcrazer]

nice update you got but i have seen some problem, LITTLE ones . i mad a pic so you will see whot i meen

1 : Move the vertic so that they are the same distanse as the others if you no whot i meen .

2 : the distance of the small polycons neet 2 bee smaller i think.

3 : this neets 2 be rounded a bit .

For the rest, EVERYTHING LOOK GOOD

[Dr.N]

hehe , i agree with those details ,
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post us ur updates

[[r3D]]

OK. BAAACK FROM THE DEAD.

updates :)

the front is really messy, i know, but that will all be patched up and fixed later on....

tell me what youz think.

http://www.photodump.com/direct/[r3D]/slightlybetter.jpg




http://www.photodump.com/direct/[r3D]/muchbettuh.jpg

[[r3D]]

come on guys.. is it that bad???

some C&C would be greatly appreciated!
:(

[shiroii]

Y0 [r3],
The side view looks really good man! This far I only saw the front view, but the side view looks pretty good :D Wanna see this finished !!! :D

[[r3D]]

Thanks for the compliments, Jeroen :)

the side is ok, i can see some mistakes, but i'll fix em all next time i open the file to work on it

more crits anyone?

[karabo]

well it looks good so far, you are going to have to work on the bonnet a little but other than that it's coming along nicely.

[Corth]

I really like that side shot, keep goin with it!

[Orkron]

I'm actually about 3/4 thru this tut myself....but then i quit...I do like your model so far :) , u can see my WIP on my site...I won't post it here for obvious reasons :_P