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TerianSilva
18-03-2004, 11:30 PM
Hi,

I am currently working on this female head. I would like to hear you comments to this. Please give me advice how to improve the model. Cuz I am not really satisfied with it. Especially the eyes are looking crappy.

The ear is really badly attached... I have to fix this soon.

Thanks,
Marcus

The images (both about 130 KB):

1. Wireframe

http://www.lanfestival.de/mbportfolio/kram/wire.jpg

2. Rendering

http://www.lanfestival.de/mbportfolio/kram/shaded.jpg

Downup
19-03-2004, 12:25 PM
Realy nice.. I have to agree to make a ear attach good on a head is hard! I am selfe doing a female now...:D

Phynius Gauge
20-03-2004, 11:15 AM
You did a really good job, but she doesn't look that much like a girl if you ask me. Maybe you should make the mouth less wide. It could also be because of the shininess. And there are a few problems with that ear, try using some reference if you're not already.

TerianSilva
20-03-2004, 01:00 PM
thanks for your feedback. You are right. The ear isn't that nice. It looks like one ear in the other. There are also some problems with the nosebridge (is this the right word?). I show the new version when ready.

greets,
marcus