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20-03-2004, 04:08 AM
I'm working on this human figure as I do not have any other work to do. I want to make it a bit masculine. waiting for your feedback
20-03-2004, 04:14 AM
well....its a good start....but u really need to work on some propotions....
1) the hands....too short...
2) the abs.... u need to give them shape.....right now...they are just like edgeloops cut on the surface
3) the knees....a bit compressed...
moreover...they are a lot of things to be crit...but since its only the start....i think u might be going to work on them....work thru the muscles.....look at people from real life...look how are there bodies....can read ben mathis' tut on 3dtotal....or even gather a few reference images....
once again...its a good start....
P.S - i am happy that i complete a thousand posts with a good reply :D
20-03-2004, 04:35 AM
Hey dude, this goes to everyone, if your trying to get some crits, and you chnage the photo (The one you posted the first time) it doesn't really help now does it, make a new post and post the update, so we can see what you have chnaged.
24-03-2004, 08:58 PM
heres the wireframe. thxs for your suggestion guys. soon iwill make the changes n update
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