(WIP)Aliens corridor

[MIND-breaker]

well here are my first work in progress pictures of the hallway.. hope u like it.. tell me what u think..and maybe what i should do :roll:

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pic1

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pic2
i extended the corridor a bit.. and i did some changes in it so it did fit nicely

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pic4
ive added a floor and made my first render with this :D
no comments?

[bullethead]

Its looking pretty good so far. Maybe add some lights to the scene. cause the black background is just killing it right now. I understand its a WIP still so im not gonna go harsh on ya with what you should so because I dont know what you invision the final product as. ;) anyways..just add some lights to it in your next render or change the enviroment color at least. and get to modeling chop chop...lol

[MIND-breaker]

well the plan now is to make a corner on the far end of the hallway and then add lights as you said.. then ill see what there will be needs for :cool:

thanks for the comment by the way

[g69]

WOW! nice piece of design....
love the shapes going onn...

my comments: please try making this scene a futuristic one!
adding some nice textures to the scene... some blue self-illuminated lights.... it would be excellent man!

really lookin forward to this!
keep up the good work man :)

[MIND-breaker]

man im trying to get this nice but its always like this.. its suposed to be a corner but its all strange and fuzzy.. well any help would be great.:o

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heres one in wireframe..

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yeah well ive fixed a door assembly that looks nice and yeah now im working on lights.. seems like noone whants to say anything about this so ill just keep on posting my progress..:halo:

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yeah now ive put sime light in the scene.. im okey with this..but yeah some color would be fine later.. what do u guys think?

[JHarford]

nice - about our problem
open your edit poyl or mesh and check your smoothing groups ,.
select all the polys and click auto smooth

fixed

[MIND-breaker]

oh i see..well thats fixed for now..

Thanks for the tip.! greatly apprichiated!:halo:

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now ive fixed the problem..and made some changes :) the green color is gone :D now what do u guys think?

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here is a second connection to the hallway and i added some nice lights here

what do u think?

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well i know im not good and i cant texture.. is here anyone nice enough to help me with this..this thing is the best thing ive done so far and i dont whanna mess it up :(

so yeah anything at all..

[g69]

i am kinda busy with some work for this week..
ill surly help ya out with this one...

man u doing a great job... just dont give up!
kive me some time!

anyways, i know some1 out here would help you out before
me... :)

keep up the good work man! :)

[MIND-breaker]

hi well thanks for ur support.. ehm its like this.. ive come so far that i dont know what to do..

ive made the lighting and the modeling is finished.. and the thing is i dont whanna ruin this with textures because im lousy at it..

so.. :halo:

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yeah i will post some sketches i made that i have forgoten to post before i started to put this thread up.. :D

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