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I0wnaBicycle
29-03-2004, 12:17 PM
This is the first car I've modelled in max, started it about 2 months ago, worked on it for about a week, got bored, and spent today fixing some stuff on it, so I just wanted some feedback on whats right and wrong for if I model another one

I've got most of the front done, except the headhights which need fixing (especially the left one which only appears black at an angle like in the render). Some of the back is done aswell, but I didnt have time to render that, I might do it later tonight if I have time

I would post a wireframe, but I dont know how. I searched the site and someone said in a thread to make a copy, use a push modifier, then apply the wire mat to that, but then the whole thing just came out black, so if someone could give me a link or something to how to render a wireframe (apart from that 2 sided one that comes out with force wire or the wire box checked in the material properties) I'll post one later

I0wnaBicycle
29-03-2004, 12:19 PM
2nd one

I0wnaBicycle
29-03-2004, 12:23 PM
unsmoothed

JHarford
29-03-2004, 12:40 PM
looks good
just turn on edged faces . and shaded . print screen and paste into image program . crop and save ..... wire renders always look crap anyway.

I0wnaBicycle
29-03-2004, 02:56 PM
some wires

I0wnaBicycle
29-03-2004, 03:05 PM
smoothed

Mystikos
29-03-2004, 06:56 PM
I love this car, and nice modelling

but...

the front lights look sloppy, like someone modelled them from plasticine

I like the wheels

slice56
29-03-2004, 07:45 PM
looks pretty nice, but you seem to have a little pinching on the headlights, and the headlight texture seems a bit flat. you might wanna model the headlights out

Ninto
30-03-2004, 04:47 AM
The headlights need to be rounded out :)