new character: magician

[nookie]

hello, here my new wip character... i've started this morning and i'm inspired by the magician of ragnarok... comments? hints? i'm quite satisfied but i feel something wrong but i can't realize what (ehm... ah usual :p )

[Stuh505]

after careful study i also feel there is something wrong. aha! it's missing arms, legs, and a head! just kidding. it would be a lot easier to notice anatomical errors if the anatomy were more complete and not obscured by clothing. what you have doesn't look wierd to me yet, it looks good

[JHarford]

good so far
really nneed more to crit

[RodrigoRosa]

nice work so far... but i guess there is a problem on the hip's muscle (see picture).. can you show a low wire?

[nookie]

here is the wire... bad poly flow? anyway... thanks for the comments

[RodrigoRosa]

i don't see any poly flow problem dude... my only crit is the second edge loop below the navel (see my pic - hip's muscle)...

keep us updated

[Cyrenn]

Im not to sure if this might help, but what if you pulled out the edges up on top below the breast, maybe to form more of the rib cage.

But, other than that it looks like its going pretty good.

Cyrenn.

WIP-
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?s=&postid=180072#post180072

[ryvick]

nice job ur doign good
i wanna see where this goes

[nookie]

hello! i haven't had too much time theese days... here a little update, i'm quite satisfied with the boots, but not with the legs (i've just started them). you're right cyrenn i've to change the shapes of the rib cage and of the bra... maybe tomorrow... it's quite late now :D

[hpslashluvr]

You have the freakiest avatar, man. o.O;;;

That being said, she looks cute, maybe give her knees tho. They're not very obvious.

[Cyrenn]

Looking good. I dig the boots.

Keep up the good work.

Cyrenn

[SteelViruZ]

Ahh, Ragnarok :D gotta love that game. In anycase i thinmk the concept is a little oo much Ragnarok and not enough your own.

Now for the actual comments, The need Kneecaps and from my oppinion the legs are just a little to long, (might also bee the posture. In anycase i'd love to see more.

Keep us posted

[nookie]

sorry for the lack of updates... i've had some pc problems :grr:
i've copletely rebuilt the model cause i had a lot o poly problems with the breasts and legs... this is my two days work...
back will probably not be visible, so i didn't put much attention in modelling. what do you think?
oh... thank you all for the comments... i love them :D

[Tojiro]

There's a kinda odd looking flat squareish part in the middle of her back, and the knees could still stand to be a bit more pronounced, but other than that I think she's coming along quite nicely!

[nookie]

little update... i think i've a lot of problems with the clothes (the look really fake) and with the cranium... but maybe i'll solve it with the hair

[Stuh505]

Hmm..looking for flaws...I think the thighs could use a little more beef (I know she's supposed to be slender, but still), and also I think they are too long..

[Rych]

Hey guy this has lots of potential, the face needs lots of help you might want to get a photo reference out for that one, looks like she is sucking in her cheeks. Also the bellybutton is kinda wierd not sure what to think of that. And the body needs more tone to it, there is no definition to the whole thing, you defined where the abs are then kinda quit there.

Rych