WIP woman face

[Dragonkiss]

hello,
here is my last model i'm working on, i don't know her name so i call her "Bonita" i found this advertisment in a magazine, and i like her very much , so i decided to try..the only problem is that i didn't have a side reference picture so i had to imagine her profil....anyway tell me if it look like her and what should i correct .it far away to be finish, and there are many problem, such as her hear, (i don't like it), the nose...what else ..i don't remember, anyway tell me so that i can correct her...thanks 4 comments..
bye

[Dragonkiss]

and my model....

[Dragonkiss]

i forgot to say that id did her with 3D max 6....:o

[Dragonkiss]

and the profil view...

[Dragonkiss]

no reply....:(...no comments....
so...or my model sucks very bad....??? or it's very good...but this i don't think so....anyway maybe should i erase this post???

[JHarford]

some threads just slip by sorry,
looks good so far, she is beatifull. i think you ened to work on the ear and the mouth , both hard areas. youve cpatured the eyes well though.keep it up :) good luck!

[Dragonkiss]

tahnk you cgstripe, you are right the ear need a lots of work..and the mouth also....but the ear is a difficult part!....thank you anyway...:)

[elros]

Looking Nice Dragonkiss!

Only crits would be the ears, which are really off but have already been comented on, and the brow ridge. I think maybey this should be a little more defined.

Keep up the good work!

[Dragonkiss]

update, with texture, but i'mnot happy yet, anyway, give me some crits....thanks...bye

[Dragonkiss]

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[Dragonkiss]

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[sarN]

its really hard to see everythign from the image sizes. Theyre probably bigger than this monitor lol. It looks good to me though from what i can see, but her eyes look a little small. Might just be me :) Nice work

[Dragonkiss]

hello sarN, i thought that if i put big image, like i rendered them , it would be a better quality, but i can make them smaller of course...thank you anyway...
and for her eye i tried to kind the original reference size
thank you anyway..:)

[Dragonkiss]

hello there,

here is an update ok i have to apologyse for the picture size, i know, but if i try to make it bigger the pc is about to collapse...shag memory allocation..lol...anyway i will try to find a way to make it bigger...
tell me what you think about it...:)

[Dragonkiss]

shag memory problem fixed..:) some more update...

[Dragonkiss]

shag memory preoblem fixed some more update...

[Dragonkiss]

more update

[Dragonkiss]

and the last one...

[Dragonkiss]

i've just start her body yesterday night, i didn't worked so much on it, it still need lots of work but..ok... we can have an idea, tell me what should i correct on what is already done..:)

[Dragonkiss]

the back view...

[Stuh505]

if i make 1 comment it is this: the angle of the noseline is too sharp, and it crimps in too low on her face. this completely changes her expression from the girl you are modelling IMO.

i like the eyelashes and eyes

[Dragonkiss]

thank you stuh505 but i didn't understand what you said about her nose exactly...:)? can you be a little bite more explicit? (sorry):)

[mr_demon]

i think u should try to move her mouth back a bit, but nice model nonetheless