View Full Version : Character: Demon (cartoon)
mecman
15-04-2004, 05:02 PM
Hello Guys!
This is my 3rd organic model, done in maya. It´s very incomplete, but I want to share it with you. Hope you like it!
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/Monstro.jpg
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d18.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d19.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/cinto.JPG
Any C&C would be great guys!
Thanks!!
YaKuZa_BOSS
15-04-2004, 05:08 PM
very cool concept and character. I'd suggest to work a bit better in his lower body section. he looks a bit weird there.
Keep up bro
geoMan
15-04-2004, 08:21 PM
nice model...i think the hooves need some work!
chaos_seed
16-04-2004, 12:25 AM
WOW !!! That's some cool work !!!model looks realy clean and has a lot of personality ! Great work !!!
mecman
16-04-2004, 04:32 AM
Hi all
Boss, I agree about the lower body section...I will work on it as soon as possible! thanks for you comment!
Geoman, I agree with you too, the hooves needs a lot of work yet......
Chaos_seed, thanks for your nice comment!!! :) It makes me very motivated!!!
thanks for the feedback guys!
T0XIC
16-04-2004, 05:37 AM
I'm definatly digging the belt!
As for the hooves, I recommend putting some cracks in them- sort of like the main split in thw center, but smaller- as if they've been worn by years of stomping about :p Also, I'm not sure what your plans for hair are at this point, but if the legs are gonna be hairy, be sure to cover the top of the hooves w/ hair.
Oh one last thing- I think the hooves shouldn't be so smooth- I'd imagine there'd be a pretty sharp edge between the bottom of the hoof and the sides, as well as along the cleave.
mecman
16-04-2004, 06:07 AM
Hey toxic! I really like your idea to the hooves, the crack thing! Thanks a lot! ;) and yes, the legs will be hairy!!
Thanks for your comment!
mecman
17-04-2004, 02:45 AM
Hello guys, a little update.
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d20.JPG
Thanks!
nendo
17-04-2004, 03:25 AM
i say work on the chains a bit more. make them thicker. there looking abit to thin
mecman
17-04-2004, 04:41 AM
Thanks for your comment nendo, I will make a test, but I think that the chains are ok...
Thanks man!;)
mecman
17-04-2004, 07:10 PM
another up, start of the buckler and the sword, the blade is only the basic shape! thanks!
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d21.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d22.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d23.JPG
mecman
21-04-2004, 04:01 AM
Here goes another up, some modifications in his face and character...
Thanks friends! hope you like!
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/d25.JPG
rubberduck
21-04-2004, 11:55 AM
Great looking model, but the arms are too thin, needs more muscles IMO, the section between the knees and the hooves looks wrong too me, the calf/ankle should be longer and straight;)
mecman
22-04-2004, 03:08 PM
Hey rubberduck, thanks for your comment!
I fixed these points!
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/demo2.JPG
Thanks man!
MainlineX
22-04-2004, 04:15 PM
Nice concept sketch and nice character! Coming on nicely!!
kuman
22-04-2004, 09:59 PM
i really like the care and attention you're giving this character.
the accessories are really neat.
my only crit would be that i think to a certain extent the accessories like armor and weapons is starting outshine the body manifold. i think a bit more attention there and a bit more detail in the overal fleshyness of the main body manifold will really pull it all together and give it a more consistent overall visual appeal.
looking forward to following your updates on this character.
-k
mecman
23-04-2004, 02:33 AM
Hey mainlineX, thanks a lot for you comment man!!;)
Kuman, thanks a lot man!! I really agree with you! the accessories are a lot more detailed than the body of my character, and I´m working on it, in my last up I start with this modification!
thanks to everybody! I really appreciate your comments! and again, sorry my english!
mecman
09-05-2004, 09:48 PM
Hi friends!
here goes the initial texture of the body, it´s far from be complete, but....hope you liked!
See ya!
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/ombreira.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/bracelete2.JPG
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/demon.JPG
This is going to look good when its all textured, nice job, nice modelling job..
One thinga bout the texture of the metal part though, a bit too glossy for me, this is a demon.. shouldn't he be dirty evil and nasty looking?
Maybe some more dust and dirt on them?
I dunno, keep posting :)
mecman
10-05-2004, 10:50 AM
Hey gab, thanks a lot!
Yeah, you´re right, the armor looks very clean when I put together with the body....I will make another texture right now! thanks a lot!
A close up:
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/close%20up.JPG
and an image not so dark as the anterior
http://www.mecmax.blogger.com.br/olhos.JPG
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