View Full Version : Character: Demon (cartoon)
15-04-2004, 05:02 PM
This is my 3rd organic model, done in maya. It´s very incomplete, but I want to share it with you. Hope you like it!
Any C&C would be great guys!
15-04-2004, 05:08 PM
very cool concept and character. I'd suggest to work a bit better in his lower body section. he looks a bit weird there.
Keep up bro
15-04-2004, 08:21 PM
nice model...i think the hooves need some work!
16-04-2004, 12:25 AM
WOW !!! That's some cool work !!!model looks realy clean and has a lot of personality ! Great work !!!
16-04-2004, 04:32 AM
Boss, I agree about the lower body section...I will work on it as soon as possible! thanks for you comment!
Geoman, I agree with you too, the hooves needs a lot of work yet......
Chaos_seed, thanks for your nice comment!!! :) It makes me very motivated!!!
thanks for the feedback guys!
16-04-2004, 05:37 AM
I'm definatly digging the belt!
As for the hooves, I recommend putting some cracks in them- sort of like the main split in thw center, but smaller- as if they've been worn by years of stomping about :p Also, I'm not sure what your plans for hair are at this point, but if the legs are gonna be hairy, be sure to cover the top of the hooves w/ hair.
Oh one last thing- I think the hooves shouldn't be so smooth- I'd imagine there'd be a pretty sharp edge between the bottom of the hoof and the sides, as well as along the cleave.
16-04-2004, 06:07 AM
Hey toxic! I really like your idea to the hooves, the crack thing! Thanks a lot! ;) and yes, the legs will be hairy!!
Thanks for your comment!
17-04-2004, 02:45 AM
Hello guys, a little update.
17-04-2004, 03:25 AM
i say work on the chains a bit more. make them thicker. there looking abit to thin
17-04-2004, 04:41 AM
Thanks for your comment nendo, I will make a test, but I think that the chains are ok...
17-04-2004, 07:10 PM
another up, start of the buckler and the sword, the blade is only the basic shape! thanks!
21-04-2004, 04:01 AM
Here goes another up, some modifications in his face and character...
Thanks friends! hope you like!
21-04-2004, 11:55 AM
Great looking model, but the arms are too thin, needs more muscles IMO, the section between the knees and the hooves looks wrong too me, the calf/ankle should be longer and straight;)
22-04-2004, 03:08 PM
Hey rubberduck, thanks for your comment!
I fixed these points!
22-04-2004, 04:15 PM
Nice concept sketch and nice character! Coming on nicely!!
22-04-2004, 09:59 PM
i really like the care and attention you're giving this character.
the accessories are really neat.
my only crit would be that i think to a certain extent the accessories like armor and weapons is starting outshine the body manifold. i think a bit more attention there and a bit more detail in the overal fleshyness of the main body manifold will really pull it all together and give it a more consistent overall visual appeal.
looking forward to following your updates on this character.
23-04-2004, 02:33 AM
Hey mainlineX, thanks a lot for you comment man!!;)
Kuman, thanks a lot man!! I really agree with you! the accessories are a lot more detailed than the body of my character, and I´m working on it, in my last up I start with this modification!
thanks to everybody! I really appreciate your comments! and again, sorry my english!
09-05-2004, 09:48 PM
here goes the initial texture of the body, it´s far from be complete, but....hope you liked!
This is going to look good when its all textured, nice job, nice modelling job..
One thinga bout the texture of the metal part though, a bit too glossy for me, this is a demon.. shouldn't he be dirty evil and nasty looking?
Maybe some more dust and dirt on them?
I dunno, keep posting :)
10-05-2004, 10:50 AM
Hey gab, thanks a lot!
Yeah, you´re right, the armor looks very clean when I put together with the body....I will make another texture right now! thanks a lot!
A close up:
and an image not so dark as the anterior
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