two stickman exercises

[Wolfe]

Hello,

This is my first post on these forums. I have recently completed two stickman animation exercises in class and I would like to see what you all think of them. They are very short.

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cage.mov

and

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/mailroom.mov

Crits are welcome.

[il_paulio]

wow that's some nice animation mate great work. Is that second voice NEWMAN from seinfeld?? It sounds like him :D

[Wolfe]

Thanks for the comment.
Yep, the second one is Newman from Sienfeld. The first one is from a movie called "The Elephant Man" which I have never seen.

[Bluder]

yeah nice animation there.

[Wolfe]

Thanks Bluder, If anyone has more comments or ideas for improvements or whatever I'm all ears.

[FutureMan]

The cage animation might be better if you didn't have him look down. Maybe have him swivel his head like he is looking out at the people infront of the cage instead.

[Wolfe]

Thanks Futureman, it really helps to get input from people who are seeing these for the first time. I will try your idea and see how it turns out.

[Wolfe]

I made some changes to the cage animation.

http://www3.telus.net/public/dgecko/cageRevised.mov

I think it is better. Thanks again FutureMan.