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kmz
22-04-2004, 03:23 PM
Well, Here is my latest attempt. It only has about an hours work in it so its very basic right now, but I want it to stay very cartoony sooo... here ya go. C&C please.
kmz
22-04-2004, 03:24 PM
front
kmz
22-04-2004, 03:24 PM
side
MainlineX
22-04-2004, 04:11 PM
Looking good dude!!
RodrigoRosa
22-04-2004, 04:26 PM
well, imo the hands are too long... and i would make his body (the superior one/chest) not too spherical... but good start... waiting for updates

keep it up
kmz
22-04-2004, 04:26 PM
thanks Mainline

No comments from anyone else?
kmz
22-04-2004, 04:53 PM
updates.
I'm not sure what you mean by the hands are too long. Do you mean the arms? I do agree about the body so I shaped it a little bit more. I also played with the head a little bit. Trying to decide whether or not to change the eyes so they are set in the head or on stalks or something. They are kind of bothering me. anyway. here are update pics. C&C please
kmz
22-04-2004, 04:54 PM
other views
kmz
22-04-2004, 07:16 PM
damnit. I leave for five min and when I come back there is an entirely different character on my screen. (i got bored, so I started playing) Allen seems to look a bit pirateish now. Responce?
RodrigoRosa
23-04-2004, 07:32 AM
ops, yeah, i was talking about the ARM, not the HAND.... imo the ARM is too long... :D... i found the creases/folds added to the face a little weird.... about the eye, i won't help you because i like the both types: one on the original pictures and the last one (the alien).... :)

keep it up
kmz
23-04-2004, 07:50 AM
I'm in my digital imaging class right now so I can't play with the mesh, but I think I'm going to change it into two different characters. The latest will be a pirate, cause I think he looks like one. maybe add some earings and stuff. The older one will stay as the office monster with the khakis and turtle neck. I'll keep updating. (and the arms will be shortened when I get home.)
Please comment, thanks
kmz
24-04-2004, 06:22 AM
update
kmz
24-04-2004, 06:23 AM
are the arms a better length?
kmz
24-04-2004, 10:18 AM
added the start of the coat and changed some coloring,
kmz
24-04-2004, 02:54 PM
Can someone help me figure out where this random thing on the shoulder of the vest is coming from. I can't find anything on the low polly. Please someone help.
kmz
24-04-2004, 02:55 PM
and the low poly
RodrigoRosa
24-04-2004, 03:15 PM
well... i think that you could shorten the arms a little more... about the new skin, i found it slightly dark... try to brighten it up