Need critiquin' pleeeeeease

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Ok, my first stab at a human male. I know there is stuff that is wrong with him but I can't tell what it is.


Pardon some of the seams and the lack of attaching (feet n' ears) >_<;

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last one >_<;

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oopsie

[goat]

Arms / shoulders should come down more. Take a good look at some anatomy ref. www.fineart.sk should help out a bit .

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Thanks goat! :)

[Dragonkiss]

ok as you said beside the fact that you have to weld some part, he has some anatomical problem....i think your problem is more an anatomic knowledge than a modeling knowledge, i think...like goat said the arm and the shoulder should be a bite downer, ans his right you should take a look to some good reference and correct your model, maybe you make his backbone a little bite more straight cause he look like hunchback to me....:) but all of this can be corrected easly, and then it will be nice...see ya!
keep us updated...

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Ohhh, eep I never noticed before about his back before... yipes! I'm fix'n him now. Thanks!