SkatePark

[Jon]

Hi,

Just started a skate park - comments and crits welcome... :)

[Jon]

Hi guys,

Made a rail and added some more detail around the scene... next update will be more... updated ;)

Anyone wanna crit or comment?

[BloodKiller]

verry nice! i would maybe add like 4 stairs with a rail going down and a little skate shop but your choice

[invert]

make the ladder going up to the half pipe higher cause that would be a long way to reach, also considering the scale of the half pipe you might wanna make the walkspace wider so people dont fall off the either side and kill themselves...lol....and you also should make the pipe wider as well, its to skinny to really do anything on, Im only basing all of this off the scale of the railing so, plus me being a skateboarder for like 12 years..lol....and maybe the rail you made shouldnt be as fat.

Right now the park looks to clutterd in my opinion. lets say someone does a trick off the ramp you made and someone decides to do a trick on the rail at the same time, that would be one bad collision.

[Ultimate Ronnie]

the half pipe also should also have a flat space in the middle. like this:

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[Jon]

Thanks for the comments guys, an update...:D

[BloodKiller]

why didnt you keep the rail? and the ramp?

i like what you did with the half pipe/ vert

[Jon]

Originally posted by BloodKiller
why didnt you keep the rail? and the ramp?

i like what you did with the half pipe/ vert

I am going to add the rail and the ramp back into the scene when I work out a better layout... thanks for all the comments :)

[3Dway'OLife]

Is it for a cartoon or are you going for realism?

I designed and modelled our local skatepark, is quite crap whin i look back at it.

Your halfpipe needs much bigger platforms and a 2m flat in the middle unless its much higher than 6ft

best think to do is just think up lines you'd like to skate then put em in a model

keep going though

[Jon]

Hi,

I'd really appreciate to see how you did when you modelled the same thing... if you still have the file that is :)

I'm plugging away at an update now - trying harder to make it better

Jon