American Retreat

[Jon]

Hi there,

I have just started looking at Max, and made this. Render time was pretty high: 1 and a half hours.

Please, C & C is more than welcome!

Jon

[TheOne]

Thats great mate! You improved a lot!

Only crit I have is that the bushes are to big!

Away from that nice job, keep it going! :)

[Chokin Hazard™]

that looks cool. You should add some hard shadows to make it look more realistic

[angelwebzine]

looks nice,but those light background could be darker

[ronrn]

Great start.

I agree that the grass/bushes are to large.

Not sure where you're going with this one, but I think a second story added to the house(for a nice view over the wall) may help the scene composition some.

Keep up the good work.:)