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Hi there,
I have just started looking at Max, and made this. Render time was pretty high: 1 and a half hours.
Please, C & C is more than welcome!
Jon
TheOne
11-07-2004, 05:47 PM
Thats great mate! You improved a lot!
Only crit I have is that the bushes are to big!
Away from that nice job, keep it going! :)
Chokin Hazard™
11-07-2004, 07:05 PM
that looks cool. You should add some hard shadows to make it look more realistic
angelwebzine
11-07-2004, 07:33 PM
looks nice,but those light background could be darker
ronrn
11-07-2004, 08:43 PM
Great start.
I agree that the grass/bushes are to large.
Not sure where you're going with this one, but I think a second story added to the house(for a nice view over the wall) may help the scene composition some.
Keep up the good work.:)
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