bath

[juan]

hi , this is my first post here. i did this scene last year, and now i'm fixing the lighting and some texturing , i hope you like it please give me your opinions.

made in maya 5 and rendered with maya software

[angelwebzine]

nice, but could be more realistic :)

[Mwhahaha]

Why is the water in the tub all ripply like that?

Unless there is a really strong wind blowing in that bathroom that water should be pretty smooth.

Maybe give it some soap suds for interest.

[Jon]

Overall, good. I agree with the comments above, though. This scene could use some worrk. Also, I'm not sure why I'm writing in this strange font... Overall: good scene, keep working on it! ;)

[[X]treme]

mirror has too much meshsmooth, and also the water needs to be more transparent and less ripply... there's nothing to make it do that in the scene

also experiment with some new lighting setups... the current one is hurting the scene overall i think

anyway, it looks good so far! just touchups that could be made here and there