The Jump

[MariusvZyl]

Hi everybody.

I'd like to share with you my first character animation.

It's supposed to be a matrixy building jump with elements of Morpheus's "glide" and Agent Smith's landing.

Please tell me what I can improve.

Thanks.
http://www.bgd.sitehostings.com/images/test1.avi

[3Dan]

I wish i could do such tricks, but i think i'll wait for the next reincarnation:D
Maybe you could put something in the background so we could see him moving against it, or since the camera seems to be linked to his belly(?) move the camera more like another human, just catching the jump and backing a bit in awe.
Just a suggestion though.

[ZAKU]

I think that for a first animation this is really good.
The secondary anim of the hand reaching for the gun is well done.
Nice job!