Another Demo Reel! Yippie!!

[warriorartz]

Hello All,

Another reel for your critiques. Thanks in advance for the harsh critiques.


http://www.warriorartz.com/demo_reel.html


Thanks

Shahbaaz

[NordicDemon]

I like it, funny when he gets mad and shoots the comp!

But a lot of the fughtning scenes looks stiff an undynamic.
take a look at this page, actual the homepage of my karate club but..

Click on the pictures and you get a movie, take a look at it, it might help ;)

PS. Page is in norwegian, so unless you understand it the rest of the site is useless.PAGE (http://www.stavangerkarateklubb.no/Html/no/NMulVi.html)

[RickStefani]

I think you have some great material but there are also some questionable ones. This is about twice long as it neads to be. I love the ones with the two birds. Also the princes bride as well as shooting the computer. Break this down by scene and do a rpint. Have you friends mark wich ones they like the best and remove the lower ones. Sometimes it is hard to be objective about your own work.

This is just my two sense. Another thing is that the models can be simple and textures non exsistant when applying for an animation job but I would work on the deformers. I think part of the stiffness comes from rigging. If it is not suposed to be rubber hose animation it should not deform that way.