human: Astronaut

[lobohome]

Hello. This will be a astronaut.
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek2.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek3.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek_siatka1.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek_siatka2.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek_siatka3.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek_siatka4.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek7.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek8.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek10.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/ludek11.jpg

[Downup]

Awsome... Awsome to the max

[Dridon]

Dude! This is going to be a five stars topic ;). Really nice

5 stars from me ;)

[lobohome]

thx :D

[Karikoga]

Fabulous stuff...

[bobpuls]

wow ...that`s gooooooood...

[Joey B]

Your skin tex is abolutely amazing, it is your model doesn't have lashes right now, else you could have fooled me in believing this was a photo!

Respect! *****

J.

[keescopyright]

WOW, just wow, specially the texture, i really like the texture. anyway if you want crits the only thing i can think of is his neck, is kinda thin, like it would snap on takeoff...

[Grashupfa]

Wow delightful =)

Show us more ^^

[Kiss Csaba]

I can't wait to see the finished project. 5stars...

[loocas]

Very nice! Thou the head model is a bit messy to my tastes... ;) Keep it up!

[wintzell]

VERY nice

[Trex2001]

nicely done, also i think textures could use some bump, but the rest is awesome...5 from me:-))

[Shuger PL]

Very good work, I like the texture very much.

Happy to see that you are from Poland, not many people from our country post their jobs on this forum.:)

5*

[rubberduck]

Very nice model!:) 5*'s from me too.
Not sure why you made the eyes out of triangles though?

[Jojomondag]

Yupp cant complain about anything its amazing. Are you going for the 3dtotal gallery?

[vladimirjp]

Originally posted by Jojomondag
Yupp cant complain about anything its amazing. Are you going for the 3dtotal gallery?
:eek: its "amazing"
hmm, ...
the model is not the best model, the ear area needs some work.
the lips look wierd, the corners of the mouth needs to be pushed back a bit.
the wried/wahsed looks renders are too bright and bviously heavily photoshoped,
the sking texture is dry and looks like a pottery skin, no glossiness or spec highlights, the corner of the eye texture is obvioously way to burned
the littel bump map that appears to be, only seems to be at the bottom of the eye,...

my $0.02

show some updates.

[lobohome]

ok ... upgrade ... i fix the corners of the mouth & nose
THX for All ... my english it`s no good sorry :)

http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/glowa.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/glowa2.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/oko2.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/usta.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/usta2.jpg

[neiy0]

i think this character is brilliant...it is so simple, yet so complex.. it has so much character to it, and i was appauled when i read vladimirjp's statement..i think he needs to...jk

you're doing a great job, and i love the fact that it doesn't look like every other human character, 5*'s from me:)

[neiy0]

also vladimirjp, making crude remarks like that and then demanding that he show an up date is far from kind.. i think you need to learn some manners

[lobohome]

ok ... here a test of skin material, the texture is test, not ready ... & no displace :)

http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/skin.jpg

[neiy0]

your eyes are to die for man..how the heck do you do them??

[vladimirjp]

Originally posted by neiy0
also vladimirjp, making crude remarks like that and then demanding that he show an up date is far from kind.. i think you need to learn some manners
"crude remarks?"
i dont think i said anything that was out of line here neiy0.
"critics" are meant to improve your work.
understand?
its not to demean the artist's work.
if everyone say its perfect, how can he improve when it is obviously not perfect.
the texture looks much better now that he added some specular highlights, but i still dont like the corner of the mouth, and the way the ears point. it just does not look right, and you see it too i hope.
so by saying what i think could be fixed with the model, "the artist" can go and re-examin his work and improve where he faultered.
that is what the critics and comments forums are for, that is why ppl post their works here before they post it in the finished sections or submit it. they want others opinion on how to improve.

and i don't think i was rude in anyway here. i never called anyone any names or demean their art works. just pointed out areas that needed more work, instead of just saying its "amazing"
i've seen amazing works. and this can get there if its tweaked a little more.

[sdmolyne]

well said vladimirjp

great model, not a bad start to the texturing. But i do think the ears look a liitle unrealistic.

keep up the great work.

[neiy0]

i agree with you on the critical part, but the way you put it up was childish, there's a difference as to how you present your self

but im not going to be childish and go on with this, let's get back to this amazing thread, and sorry if anything made u "mad"

:)

[lobohome]

hello.
im back :)
this is a test of new maps :)
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/05a.jpg

[simps]

THis guy is looking great. Although the last update, the bump seems too high. It looks like his face is caked with makeup. Why are you changing the skin texture? The previous renders textures were great.

[neiy0]

i agree exactly with simps. but it's looking far better than before:)

[lobohome]

hmmm... i think you have right :)

[Tank[NL]]

incredible detail, great work.

[lobohome]

here a litle update ... :)
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/06b.jpg

[bradjames]

It looks a little better then the last one but it still has that caked with makeup look. Keep working at it. All in all this is a wonderful model.

[Guerilla.Artist]

thanx for making my eyes are burning ....

AWESOME WORK !

[lobohome]

update :)
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/08ab.jpg
http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/09a.jpg

[rjsmal]

man this is good i love it 5 * from me

[arsen_lopan]

WOW!!!!

that's awesome. really nice

but why he(or she!!??) is sad:D

[neiy0]

i agree with bradjames, the skin still has a really dry effect on it, and seems like he jumped into a planet full of makeup:p

[Renzsu]

Wow.. gotta love this guy! Perhaps you need to tone down the bumpmap a bit though, his face is almost covered in acne completely now.
nice subtle use of dof..

[RickStefani]

Nice modeling and textures so far. I look forward to this getting complete.

[Avatar-3DT]

Very good work. I would suggest to invert the bump ,ap so the bumps point inward to simulate pores. Also, use the bump map to creat more creases around the mouth and on the cheeks, as old man have (this is an old man, isn't it? If not, my mistake). You could also darken the map a little on his chin to create the impresion he has a "five a clock shadow". It would suit him perfectly with that cigar hanging in the corner of his mouth.

[neiy0]

funny...IMO i dont think he would look good with a 5:00 shadow, or a cigar, he looks like more of a cigarrette person..;)

[hpslashluvr]

definitely looks adrogynous<~~can't spell that, darn

can you post a pic of your lighting setup? and all your material set ups... x.x;;;

are you using photo refs for the eyes/skin or just hand painted?

[adamos]

HA HA Polak potrafi.

[the_jigu]

man awsome work!!!

supposed to be on front page.don't u think guys?

[ido]

5 stars work lobohome :)

[lobohome]

ok ... update, i work on displace map ...

thx 4 all :)

http://www.student.asp.gda.pl/~lobo/forum/010a.jpg

[neiy0]

i think u got it this time, it actually feels like real skin, that you could actually touch..and he wouldn't turn into powder..:) awsome job...

is he going to have eye brows? cause right now he just looks like has singed brows?

fantastic job, im so glad you worked on your texturing, it is so appealing now:):)

[rubberduck]

Very nice! 5*;) Skin texture looks better and better