Short Animation, Comments Please:)

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Just finished a short animation. Its entitled "Friends dont let monkeys drive drunk" Its 22.6 Mg, Divx codec, and runs for 1:31. I did it for a film festival for my school. Let me know what you think or if you have any problems downloading or playing it. I would like to know:) Thanks!

Heres the link; right click and save as -
Short Animation (http://www.jeremywynn.com/monkeysdrive4web.avi)

[dabigmuckymuk]

Hey,
first off, id like to congratulate you on completing your animation! Ive been working on mine for about a year now, and we are finally done.

I like the concept of your animation, and i loved the simplicity of the neighborhood. The car looked good and fit into the simplicity of the environment. I had some issues with the monkey though, he wasnt as bubbly as the world around him, so he doesnt really seem to fit that well. Your walk cycle needs a lot of work, but over all i think it is a great first attempt!
Take care and keep at it!

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thanks for the comments:) yeah the walk cycle isnt the greatest, need some more practice in that area.

[HollowHull]

the sound really gives it life but as said earlier you could work on some things, could I ask you to look at my animation I'd like you input

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sure i'd love to see it, where can i view it at? thanks for the comments:)

[HollowHull]

here's a link to it
http://wdcstudios.tripod.com/test2/main2.html