View Full Version : Elderly Gentleman
12-01-2005, 11:57 AM
Well, I think I'll try to start off my first post with something that i think is good. Any crits are very welcome. http://interface-media.biz/images/fine_art/Old_Man5.jpg
12-01-2005, 04:02 PM
Impressive first post, I tell you that :) Great render, I love all the features, especially the mouth. However the right side of the pic is darker than the left, that makes the eyes not equally dark. Also his right cheek seems really plain, there's nothing there... But nevertheless a great work. Post more :D
I agree, especially about the contrast issue. It almost looks like he has cateracts in his right eye (if he does, lol, fair play to you for including it), so unless this intentional i would say clear it up. A brilliant piece, keep it up!
13-01-2005, 07:32 AM
i hadnt noticed what you guys said before about the eyes. but as i looked at the original, they arent actually like that...i blame it on the flash from my digital camera.
also, the right side is kind of unfinished...i had to tun it it before i got the chance. i'll try and finish it up soon.
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