Realistic Female Figure Modeling (NUDITY)

[overcontrast]

Hellow to all of u out there, i'm new to this forum,
Here is my first female modeling attempt, and my second whole body modeling attempt. I want it to look realistic and natural. At this stage i dont feel that good about some part of my model, thats why i put it here for u guys to comment on it... please dont feel shy to give ur hardest critiqs... i'm just here to learn... thank you very much

http://www.tinym.devisland.net/thready_wip/linia_03_angles.jpg

http://www.tinym.devisland.net/thready_wip/linia_02_bodyparts.jpg

http://www.tinym.devisland.net/thready_wip/linia_01_wire.jpg

[Woody]

A good start, but I think there are some things that can be tweaked. Her stomach is to low, or probably the distance between it and her breasts is too large (I think is that one). I'm not convinced about the breasts shape, I think they have to fall a bit more to be natural, and also her butt is too defined. For the face some more shots will be great to see how it is, but I think the nose needs more work.

But keep working, it's a promising start!

[Avatar-3DT]

Personaly I think the breast are ok. I agree 'tho with Woody about the distance between them being too big. Also I think the stomach its ok but the distance between her hips and ribcage its too big. The edge of the breasts going into his arms its too long and the calf are almost as thick as the thighs. I really think there is something wrong with the ears. They seems too thin and the shape its not right.

[overcontrast]

thank you both soo much... i'm glad that u pointed out the flaws in my model that i also had in mind... i'll keep all ur suggestions in mind and will post updates soon... keep ur c&c comming

[<<GhosTS>>]

I agree with almost all the things woody pointed out+ i think the forhead is too high..(The head is too tall after the eye line)The arms & legs are good but Scapula must be more promonant.Good modeling so far.Hope to see updates.

[overcontrast]

Heres some more updates... please tell me what wrong u see in it... btw sorry for the update delay, i hardly get tym to work on it... i work only abt an hour or an hour and a half on the model a day.

http://www.tinym.devisland.net/thready_wip/linia_04_more.jpg

[Two Left Hands]

Looking pretty good so far... I don't really care too much for the head right now... But I like the butt... :o I also agree with the breasts looking all too unnatural...

Keep up the good work...

[<<GhosTS>>]

The mesh is too distorted now...not very smooth..

[overcontrast]

Two Left Hands: Thank u very much for ur comment, yes i do feel soething is wrong with he breasts too... i'll try tweaking it a bit. but the thing is the ref i'm using got breasts just like that.. so now its more of a taste issue.

<<GhosTS>>: thanks for ur crit.. i'll try fixing it.

I would like to have some comments on the shoulder area and the viginal area, and i wud also like to hear soemthing abt the overall proportion... that would help me a lot...
thank you all for ur time.

[Avatar-3DT]

The proportion look perfect for now. The sex area seemed better before and the head its still big. I like those unperfect shadows on the mesh, it makes her more realistic. Nice skin shader also. Overall, good work.

[Dozer]

I think it looks great sofar. To all of you who think the breasts "don't look real" I have some disturbing news; real breasts lie low and wide, fake (implanted) breasts ride high and together...Those look very real as far as the general shape.

[Two Left Hands]

lol......

Everyone seems to have there 2 cents worth of critz for breasts.... I guess it is just a preference thing. :o