devilish girl

[Grashupfa]

Hi

I recently started to model this char. I worked about 7-8 hours on it. Please tell me what u think and what is wrong (i think there are some proportion errors?)

[Grashupfa]

side view

[Grashupfa]

Front view..

[hpslashluvr]

breasts are way too low and she needs that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest...no clue what it's called, go look at your own arm or refs

[Grashupfa]

Thx 4 your crit!
I am sorry but i dunno what u mean with" that thing that happens when your arm connects to your chest"... I looked at my arm - but i couldn't find anything that is missing :(
Made some changes (breasts are higher now!)

Looking forward for your replies ...:D

[merlyn]

lots to look at and modify.

Use this image for reference.
keep refering to real reference and see where it does look right and tweak, eventually it'll look beans!

[merlyn]

another image for the right view.
good luck :)

[Phynius Gauge]

Hey Grashupfa :). I think hpshlashluvr is pointing at the fact that there's not a lot of definition at that point where the arm meets the torso, and it kind of looks weird the way the arm tapers off. Look at the references merlyn posted. They should help you out a lot :).

[Grashupfa]

Thx guys!
I'll rework it
Stay tuned :)

[hpslashluvr]

yea, this is what i sort of mean, sorry for crappy jpeg quality

[ross_coe]

one thing that i noticed is that the breasts point forwards too much. they should be pointing in a direction coming from the spine. think of 2 imaginary perpendicular lines that go from the spine out and you more-or-less got your nipple positions....kinda makes the breasts point out to the side a little bit

[Grashupfa]

Hi,
I am really appreciated that you guys help me so much!:)
I updated the chest - tell me what you think and if this update is a step forward or backward :roll:
In my oppinion it looks better now :D

[Tank[NL]]

looks a lot better. althought the shoulders are still kinda flat and the breats dont look quitte right.

but is is a step forward, keep it up.

[hpslashluvr]

post a front and side view

[Grashupfa]

thx for your replies - yep here they are:

side view:

[Grashupfa]

front view:

[hpslashluvr]

her butt needs to be rounder, and "hang down" just a little more...and give her some thighs! x.x;;; from the side view, all of this is directed towards

[Phynius Gauge]

Nice improvement. However, a lot more should be done:

The thumb looks broken, the hand looks weird (stretch your fingers out like that and look at them...the hand should go straight into the fingers, whereas her fingers are slanting down awkwardly) the belly area looks too flat, the pelvis still looks like it's too small (although I can't be sure 'cause it's covered), there should be more of a nice inward curve between the hip bones and the ribs from the front view, and like hp said, she needs some thighs, the legs need more definition, the butt needs to be, more butt-like :p, the ears look too large and seem dishevelled, and should be a bit closer to the face, the neck needs more curves from the side view, and overall, she lacks many of the subtle curves that made the original Feng Zhu design so appealing.

I'm not trying to be harsh, just trying to give it to you straight :). The latest update was a big improvement, so good work, but it's gonna take more of that :).

[Grashupfa]

Wow-thats a lot!
Thx guys, thats some nice crit, looks like i can learn a lot in this project, i'll fix that, keep watching!:)

btw: i don't fear harsh crit -> as long as it is useful:D

[Grashupfa]

I can't work on the project in the next 4 days cause i am going on holidays ;)
See u soon with a new update :D

[Grashupfa]

Hey ...

I am showing u this just to let u guys know i am still working on it ... :D
Currently i tweak the hair
Anyway, let me know what u think :p

[Grashupfa]

Hey ...

I am showing u this just to let u guys know i am still working on it ... :D
Currently i'm tweaking the hair ...
Anyway, let me know what u think :p

Cheers,

http://s2.bgweiz.at/mario.wagner/cg/hair_1.jpg

[Grashupfa]

Hi

Phew... I lost all my files, cause my harddisk crashed.... took me some time to recover at least the latest files :roll:
She is completly rigged and i am going to finish the armor next...
Hair is still very wip...
C&C welcome (as always)

Cheers

[Grashupfa]

hm...wow...i found time to continue this and meanwhile i learned zbrush...
Nothing to say so far, pls CRIT! (I start to texture soon)

[tecm0]

erm try to tweak the body more???

[greedo]

try and make the face a little more feminine. and remove the crease in the middle of the head. your improving heaps keep going

[Phynius Gauge]

I agree with greedo. The arms still look a bit funky btw. But you are improving dude :).

[Grashupfa]

@tecm0
Thx for ur comment. well, i'll do my best :wall:

@greedo
thx, yes, the crease will be removed. I know that the face suxx (i modelled it out of an image...maybe thats the problem) but what exactly doesn't look feminin. I tried to change some areas, but it didn't help...

@Phynius Gauge
thx for the comment, buddy. kk, i'll do my best with the arms. :shout:

i attached the head, maybe some of you can tell me what exactly suxx at the head?

[hpslashluvr]

i'd work on the nose most, and for the hair i suggest using planes

[Tank[NL]]

steady on you are getting better(but im not one to talk :P) erm, the one thing that really srung out for me, is the shoulders, or lack there or. with the arms stretched the way they are, they should bulge at the top.

now they look kinda freaky, like their are both dislocated or something :)

anyway, i like the horns. interrested to see how you will continue this character.
keep it up.

[tecm0]

@Grashupfa

keep improving man! though i have to retweak mine female model too haha :~~~ :dunno:

[Grashupfa]

hi

thx to all your replies!

****...i made a stupid mistake last saturday...i deleted the history while i was in high poly mode...now my model is highpoly and i can't recreate it!!! Does anybody know how to fix that problem? Is there a solution? if not...its hard working with 194 120 faces.... well...maybe i am gonna texture it, otherwise i'll start a new project-> if there is no solution, so please help! :wave:

using...maya 6.0