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Name_less
21-07-2005, 10:44 AM
modeled in Maya. i changed my way of modeling from box to face by face. I just like it better and it seems to be a more accurate way of modeling versus making a bunch of confusing cuts.
just my preference, critques welcome.
http://kenebrewdigital.com/simonaenlarge.jpg
Name_less
21-07-2005, 10:47 AM
Here's an update. Tweaked a couple of things...added legs, and hands.
http://kenebrewdigital.com/simonaenlarge2.jpg
JamesMarshall
22-07-2005, 05:56 PM
The forehead extrudes too much... For women, their brow is more smooth.
Can we see wires of the body?
Name_less
26-07-2005, 12:54 AM
i'll post some wires for the body soon...i changed the forehead as well.
Name_less
03-08-2005, 09:55 AM
modeled in Maya. i changed my way of modeling from box to face by face. I just like it better and it seems to be a more accurate way of modeling versus making a bunch of confusing cuts.
just my preference, critques welcome.
http://www.kenebrewdigital.com/simonawire.gif
http://www.kenebrewdigital.com/simona4enlarge.jpg
ggutshal
03-08-2005, 10:16 AM
Perhaps it's just me, but it seems that her legs are a little short.
bradjames
03-08-2005, 05:28 PM
Overall this is looking very nice. I think the legs do look a little short but it could be the angle of the render. You should also give the feet somemore attention becasue they look a little square. Besides that it looks very nice.
Name_less
03-08-2005, 09:22 PM
Overall this is looking very nice. I think the legs do look a little short but it could be the angle of the render. You should also give the feet somemore attention becasue they look a little square. Besides that it looks very nice.
thanks bradjames, I'm positive that the legs are the right length, but you're right about the feet needing more work. I think the heels are the boxy area.
ggutshal
03-08-2005, 09:31 PM
I think the heels are the boxy area.
That and they lack arches.
Name_less
03-08-2005, 10:43 PM
That and they lack arches.
thanks, i didn't observe that
LAZIKAT
19-08-2005, 01:21 PM
yeah i also do think the legs are a bit short but i like the body and those hips!!! good man, the body looks good but like i said the legs may be a bit short and something about her lips or the forehead that is throwing me off but good work doe!
Axeface
19-08-2005, 04:48 PM
Everyone is different, some women have foreheads like that. It's nice to see someone modeling a 'real' woman and not a stick 'model'. Good job, the legs are perfect, they look short because shes a bit bigger guys.
Axeface
19-08-2005, 04:49 PM
I think you should make her belly a little bigger as her hips are pretty big :lurve:
puhzool
19-08-2005, 04:55 PM
i reckon she is hot, the legs look short cause she is standing flat footed, personally i think she has got good proportions, sweet model name_less
morph1
22-08-2005, 11:19 AM
Looks quite nice man, just looking at the ankles kind of big and thick.
RockstarKate
22-08-2005, 11:18 PM
Nice looking!
But I think the breasts and the bottom of the ribcage are too high. I guess the breasts can be that high if you want them to look fake, but the ribcage definitely needs to come down.
Name_less
10-09-2005, 10:15 AM
Hey thanks for the crits everyone! Sorry it took me so long to respond. I DON'T KNOW WHAT THE HECK IS UP WITH ME! I start modeling something, I think it's looking good and I get a feeling of I know my next model is going to be way better than this one. I just lose all interest in finishing a model when I have that feeling.
Where's the Dr. Phil for character modelers?
Name_less
10-09-2005, 10:17 AM
I think the angle of view is making the legs look a bit short.
D3agle
10-09-2005, 02:41 PM
Nice..Very nice.But use the simmetry modifer when you are modeling character :D
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