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hi all.
here my last work with 3dsmax, rendering vray,compositing photoshop.
inspire by the synagogue of Dijon(france).
Thanks for looking!
http://membres.lycos.fr/foru3d/synagogue/cgtalk/vue_cam04_03b.jpg
http://membres.lycos.fr/foru3d/synagogue/cgtalk/vue_face_b.jpg
invert
23-10-2005, 09:39 AM
It looks really really good and it would have fooled me for a real photo IF your tree in the left of the top image wasnt so out of place compared to your photo used for composition. also your doors look out of place as well. I think its the texture thats doing it, plus they just dont seem to go with the building design.
Also for the bigger bricks on the front of the building, you might wanna consider next time to model out the bricks rather then using a map, they look way to flat and fake. But overall this is a good piece.
invert: thank you for your critic constructive ;)
invert
24-10-2005, 05:36 AM
Its no problem. I know its a final image but crits can only help in the future ;)
I made some change
http://membres.lycos.fr/foru3d/synagogue/cgtalk/vue_cam04_03f.jpg
JacksonEmpire
29-10-2005, 04:20 AM
i really like this pic! has a good feel to it!
Post some diffrent views of it!
:)
invert
29-10-2005, 09:55 AM
Yes I like the change, it fits a bit better with the background now. I still dont like the front detail of the building much, but overall its a good piece. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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