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hey this is mine and looking forward to see your feedback
Worked with 3ds max6.0 and mentalRay and Photoshop.
hey this is 2 my last works in 3ds max6.0 and mentalRay and photoshop.
Render time : above 40 min for each pic
wait for feedback.
31-10-2005, 10:48 AM
The quality of the render is OK, but you have problems with the scale! The flower on the table is huge, and I think the top of the room is also very low! If you fix these problems, you will have a nice scene!
31-10-2005, 11:56 AM
Yes the render quality is good
The plant is too big and I think you have too much furniture. Maybe you should think a little about the design of the room
31-10-2005, 01:05 PM
WOW! thats relly nice... i understand the long rendering time, those pics were good!
its a litle wierd in the second pic that the road goes right into the door.
31-10-2005, 03:01 PM
Just a site notice: I've merged your two threads togeather.
The modeling, texturing and lighting are very well executed in the 1st one. A problem I can spot (besides the disproportion of objects) is the extreme perspective in the 2nd - it doesn't add to the realism due to the fact that very few realworld cameras are able to capture such a wide angle without distortion. Also the lighting needs more work - the shadows are way too sharp on the ceiling, concidering that it's illuminated by bounced light from the ground outside.
yes i agree , i belive this sharp shadows but ,i dont know what should i do??
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