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09-11-2005, 06:13 AM
Hey people, I've done this in 3D Max 7 and Vray 1.46. I don't know if it looks professional? Actually i would love some critics on both the pictures and would like to know which one do you like more. Thanx, your critics will always help alot. Thanx again.
09-11-2005, 07:02 AM
I personally think the Detailed Scene edited is your best. The only thing that..."catches" the eye would be the water. Im not sure if there is a tutorial out there, but it doesn't seem to be realistic and it doesn't flow with the rest of your scene. It looks too much like Jello :). Search for a tutorial, if there is one, and maybe you will get lucky :)
09-11-2005, 08:18 AM
aigh a couple of crits to give yeh..first like sicarius said the water looks kinda odd...i think its becuhz the ripples dont seem like ripples but they remind me of more of a hillike shape... My last critique is the bridge...if you look at it at the middle of the bridge it looks way too thin compared to the rest.. if you used a cylinder to somehow mold it maybe make it farther down so its not so thin or somein... anyways other then that the pictures look really good :)
edit: oh and i just noticed that the balconies coming off of the building look a little off.. the ones on the far right side kinda look like ther comin off of nothin...
09-11-2005, 08:34 AM
The edited picture is definately the best one. As for looking professional, not quite I feel. The problem lies with the water, the 'waves' are too big, make them smaller and I think the image will come together nicely.
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