Woman WIP [Nudity]

[Brent]

had some complaints about my other thread so I`ll start a new thread.
Comment if you want to.
thanks

http://img508.imageshack.us/img508/3996/render32jj.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[rothstar]

Looks very very nice to me mate. Ill be keeping my eye on this one. What software do you use?

[andoy]

Looking great so far, only the nipples look a little weird, they are too uniform i think.

[Brent]

thanks for the comments
I use Max8 rothstar and rendered in vray
I`ll work on that area andoy..thanks for the suggestion

[Brent]

here`s a side view....I was told mabey the head looks a little big...
what do you think about it?
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/1594/side1zu.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[uglycat]

not to me. :) nose could stand to be a bit pointier though, but that's just my tastes.

how did you get such nice lips though? such nice definition around the edges, quite nice! ^_^

[andoy]

The head looks fine, although from the side view the trapezium area looks a little pointed, maybe make it slightly thicker and the shoulder / traps area (leading into the neck) won't look so peaked, i think it would look better slightly more rounded.

[dhruvsm]

hi Lorenzo Maggi...it's coming up really nice...very well modelled...nice face and the torso is also amazing...i really liked the organic feeling....i think around the nipples are a bit flat......will surely follow this thread.......

will love to see the wires also.....

hope to see some update soon....but wires ....please...giving 4* now!!!

:dance: :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

[Brent]

thanks very much for the comments guys:)

@uglycat...the head is modelled from an actual person,and she has this nose:)...which I like very much:):)
the lips can be defined from 2 loops that are close placed together.

@andoy...this area is thin yes...upon looking at the mesh I can easily soften that area thanks.

@dhruvsm..the nipple area will be changed yes to make it rounder.
I will post wires soon ....but imageshack is not co-operating at the moment.
I hope to have to the lower legs done thois weekend

again thanks for all the comments,and especially for the critiques.

[Brent]

ok..here are some wire frames:)

http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/8451/wirez3wo.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Teyon]

Looks good. Her upper arm could be a bit wider. Women with large breasts like that usually have large shoulders/upper arms.

[ISAIAH]

Lorenzo,

Hey want to start off by saying this was one of my favorite models I’ve seen on this forum. I’m sort of a newbie myself. Working on some stuff but haven’t built up the courage to post just yet. Still trying to perfect my skills. I said this “was” one of the favorites, only because it looks like you changed the nose! She looked great. I’m assuming she’s African and if she is the nose is going to be fat and the lips very full. This is an awesome forum, but I’ve noticed that just about all the female models have thin noses and lips. Not to say that’s a bad thing because it’s only reflecting the creativity of the artist and what they see. But she started off with a wide (fat) nose and I saw a comment regarding it and you changed it. Like I said this is an awesome forum, but I think it could use a little more diversity. Again, I’m a newbie, so maybe I shouldn’t be trying to rock the boat. And maybe the thinner nose represents the model a little closer, but I think she was beautiful with the wide nose. But again the model is awesome and it’s still one of the best I’ve seen here, can’t wait to see the rest of her. Keep up the great work. And think about changing that nose back. ;)

[Brent]

hi isaiah

thanks very much for your comments.
I am aware yes that the standard nose seems to be the perfect pointed nose:)
However I haven`t changed the nose:)...it is the same from when I started:)
The low ploy wire does make it look more pointed,but remember that a low poly mesh isin`t a true representation.when it is smoothed it goes wider.
So no worries,the nose hasen`t changed:)
I`m currently working on the final render which is a close shot of the face.
The full body so far was more or less a modelling exercise:)

[ISAIAH]

Good to here. Are you going to post any pics of the model herself? Also, which technique of modeling did you use?

[Brent]

when she is finished I will post some pics of her.
I used poly modelling in Max8.

[CriTiCeRz]

good job buddy.. i luv her. very sexy. and trust me i seen alot of gurl nipples =D and that one looks different LOL. well ill be comin to visit this thread sum time i wanna see the done model.

[ISAIAH]

Hey just wanted to say that your latest post is great! 5 stars. Was this the start of it?

[Brent]

hi isaiah

yes....it`s the same girl:)
thanks

[HansKa]

I like it alot! Very nice modeling! ;D keep it coming!

[ISAIAH]

Excellent!!! I thought you were going somewhere else with this character, but I must say it looks fantastic. Can you write a tutorial? :)