Female Monster [NUDITY]

[darkyien]

Okay everyone!
Here's the continuity of my previous WIP called Head model
[here] (http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=39386)

Waiting for C&C!
Cheers!

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8808/clay8qs.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[freakyihop]

I like the face but her abs need work they seem to be just lines and the shoulders should be wider then the hips. you might want to show the collar bone abit more because she seems skinny enough to see it, can we see a wireframe.

[darkyien]

In fact, the are not really abs, more like a turtle shell... As said in the title, it's a monster, do not try to compare it with a normal human! But anyway, what do you mean by skinny enough? I'll post a wireframe soon!

[freakyihop]

well on humans the skinner you are the more your bones show and she seems pretty skinny.

[darkyien]

You're right, her bones should be more seen, didn't understand you... Actually, I don't know how to make the bones appear without breaking the polygon flow & keeping my mesh clean... Could you help?!

[darkyien]

Hi everyone! Some updates! C&C please!!
I'm looking for someone who can efficiently teach me how to model a feet!

:max:A clay render :
http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/1159/clay29lg.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

:max:And a shaded wire :
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6048/shadedwire0bf.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[darkyien]

No crits?

[Deto]

Hmm, Her rear end looks lil weird, I mean it starts too low and her hip is a little too 'wide' compared to upper body :)

The model itself looks good, but the wire looks quite... well... bad, honestly.. I mean, can't make much out of the wire picture :)

As for feet, you might wish to look at the Speed Modelling Challenge 'Orcanic feet' or something, there was alot of tutorials along the beginning :)

[freakyihop]

I still think the shoulders be wider. the legs look good but if she is a monster maybe you should give her Different kind of feet something beast like.

[McRed]

The cuts on her stomach muscles look more like a snake's underside. It's cut way to harsh, it looks like scales instead of natural muscles. Your legs look too long, but barely, it could be the camera perspective. I agree with Deto, the hips are too wide.

[darkyien]

The cuts on her stomach muscles look more like a snake's underside. It's cut way to harsh, it looks like scales instead of natural muscles.

In fact, they're scales lol! So great, it looks the way it should :smug: .

You're definitly right about the hips, the shouldn't as large as the shoulder!

About the butt, yeah, I got kinda bored doing this part again & again to have a good result so, maybe I'll spend some more times on it soon! As for the feet, I'm currently working on them, I'll post updates soon!

And what do you mean "the wire is bad"?. The model isn't clear enough?

Thanks for your answers you all, I really appreciate them!

[McRed]

I'm glad you achieved what you were going for! :)

[darkyien]

lol did you take it bad?

[McRed]

of course not, I was only letting you know what it looked like to me, I'm glad that what I see is what you are trying to achieve. I'm glad that I see what you want me to see.

[darkyien]

lol Okay! I'm working on her clothes right now! I'll post updates soon!