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Jenova
12-06-2006, 02:00 AM
I thought it was about time I started a project since I've been on the forum for a year now and haven't even made anything in 3d apart from one competition entry. This is the first thing I've tryed to make and actually stuck to it, started it this morning and its coming out better than I thought it would. Crits apprecated indeed.

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/470/chestpics0py.png

metabaron
12-06-2006, 03:00 PM
Nice progress.Send us more pics of the model concuded!

Jenova
12-06-2006, 03:13 PM
Thanks, I'll try and work on it some more.

Sathe
12-06-2006, 03:26 PM
The pectoral muscles are a bit to exagerated so try and bring them back a bit. Round off the chest so it falls off more to the sides and decrease the strength of the crease down the middle.
Its good to see you getting into 3d, i wish you the best of luck with it. let me know if you need any help through msn or anything.
Keep us posted. :)

Jenova
12-06-2006, 10:19 PM
Cool, Ill be sure to make those corrections.

markus_omega
15-06-2006, 10:53 PM
looks good. could you tell me how you made the abs. i'm working on a character as well but i cant get his abs to look good.

Jenova
16-06-2006, 12:47 PM
Hmm, well as Sathe said my abs are wrong, they should go off to the side instead of stopping abrubtly, anyway, heres my abs with the highlights if you wanna use it as a bit of reference, after meshsmooth it looks pretty alright.

http://img82.imageshack.us/img82/8937/abs0cv.png

Tingles
16-06-2006, 01:25 PM
the model is looking great so far man!
stick with 3D it's awsome fun!
Good luck

0sharp0
16-06-2006, 02:13 PM
hey!
great to see ur posting! :)

really cool model u hav there....but i think are some excessive loops in teh model at this stage....really cant say tho....ill have to wait and see how u connect them to the body later on.....
plus...in think the seperation of each ab is not that distinct....and the line going thru the middle shouldnt be that deep either IMO.......

but very cool...cant wait!

Jenova
07-07-2006, 02:41 AM
Been working on another chracter from the Joan tut, made the head and some of the body, still needs imporvement. I decided to make a fight scene or something between the two of the chatracters I'm making.

http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/6379/joanhead4os.jpg