my first post!

[golfingmateo]

this is a rendering of a golf shoe and golf club that i modeled for a class project. it was rendered with maya software render.


http://students.washington.edu/titusm/golfShoeBackground2.jpg

[0sharp0]

now that is sweeeet....brilliant...cant find any probs :D

could u post teh wireframe?...just wanna see for possible errors ;) :) :D

[andoy]

You have a very Olden age feel to this render, it's very nice and appealing...

[golfingmateo]

thanx for the commnets guys.

here is my wireframe. unfortunately i deleted the history on the mesh in this scene so i cant show u the unsmoothed version.

if u wanna look for problems in the render i can mention a few. the end of the shoe where it meets the sole looks funny, the texture on brown area is stretching, the shadow inside the shoe is too dark, my friend says the shoe has too much of a platic look, but the shoes actually have a bit of a plastic look in real life.


http://students.washington.edu/titusm/shoebackgroundwire.jpg

[Edgeloop]

Nice stuff ;)

Maybe a lil bit of dirt on the spikes would also look good..

But it's great like it is...clean! ;)

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[golfingmateo]

thanx Edgeloop, thats a good point, i probably should consider dirtying up the shoes, especially the bottom.

[USED]

Welcome to the forums golfingmateo
very nicely done!
4****'s keep posting