Iron Bridge...

[JonM]

I think I am pretty much done with this one... :)


http://jonmdesign.net/images/3d/bridge09.jpg

3dsmax5 and brazil with some color correction in brazil...


crits/flames whatever are welcome!

:D

[David Ciprian]

It's great even if the bridge texture makes it look to be made of one big metal piece.that's it's only problem...what the...?...flames?! here?...oh yeah i forgot: i'm jealous because i can't make realist outdoor scenes :cry:

[Trevorn]

Modelling and texturing look great, but I get the feeling there's a little too much ambient light. If the shadows on the stone walls under the bridge were a little darker, I think you would get a beter sense of depth.;)

[JonM]

ok thanks guys I will try too see what I can do about the shadows :)

[Andy_k-3DT]

I'd try dropping the diffusion on all your textures - or increasing the saturation of your background image - the bridge although rusty still looks a bit too smooth to me and the stone texture under the bridge looks as though it's pixellating quite badly - it would benefit from being scaled down as the stone blocks look awfully large compared to the others in the bridge.

Nice image though - just could benefit from a few tweaks

Andy

[ronrn]

Good image. I'm a bridge buff myself. Even helped to build a few in my time. The angle of the stone walls underneath the bridge is what catches my eye. They dont appear to be at 90 degrees to the bridge structure and stone column support. It seems too that the column for the opposite side should be visable. A little light penetration from the opposite side under it may also help a bit. Keep up the goog work:)

[Splash]

That is IRON BRIDGE in merry old england!!! I remember going on a school trip there about 3 years ago. GJ

[JonM]

ok I have been messing around with it some more I should be able to post another rendering up soon. Yes it is based on the old Iron Bridge in England but I just used that as a ref becuase I am not bridge builder :P


-Thanks for all your comments :D

[fabrizzzio]

Nice image.
I think that the edges maybe could be more rusty (stones and metals). And remember: where the sun hits with light is different that where there is in shadows. For example, the color of the metal is pale because the sunlight affects directly the paint.
You could add some irregularity, so the things won't be so predictable.
:D

[Zytrex]

That looks really good. Only two things bug me: the rocks in the center on the post and the roof of the house look kind of strange.

[3Dan]

This scene has an impressionist tinge, all pastel tones, European Summer lighting. Perhaps a little contrast on the shadows underneath the bridge would help make it more realistic.

[Mariska3d]

Looks very nice, maybe some more depth of field.(background more blurry)

[darnel25]

really nice work.

[Gl2eEn]

Originally posted by Trevorn
Modelling and texturing look great, but I get the feeling there's a little too much ambient light. If the shadows on the stone walls under the bridge were a little darker, I think you would get a beter sense of depth.;)



Absolutly agree!!!

but did you fix the little things, there briks on middle of the breadge.. ->

http://home.carolina.rr.com/cynical/images/bridge09_edited.jpg



u said you'll fix em or somethign like that

[Talonsblade]

Nice picture, keep going. There is something bugging me though, is there suposta be another set of pillers and bridge support on the other side of the bridge. I didnt see any.

Just a thought.

[JonM]

ya I fixed those things, and yes there is suppose to me more metal supports under the bridge I forgot to put it in for that rendering


-thanks guys!

[JonM]

http://www.jonmdesign.net/images/3d/bridge12.jpg

here is another rendering, I am not too happy with the whole thing yet, I am gonna try it with the sun coming from another direction so the shadows of the bridge iron part will be seen :)

[ronrn]

The ironwork looks great. The corners off the pillar are a little smooth. Good work.

[aamiracle]

Have you played the game Commandos2.The movies look very similar to your artwork.I think the fence bars are too close to each other.

[JonM]

http://www.jonmdesign.net/images/3d/bridge13.jpg


*updated* :D

[synkronizer]

i think you overdid it a little bit.
Even the stone pillar in the middle looks flat. One of its sides should have more shading on it.

[Lincoln Hawk]

Nice picture. Very good.

[Lincoln Hawk]

nice textures, nice dof, nice work.

[Sublime420]

It's really good man. Very photo realistic.
How I was wonder, how did you do the tree? Are they modeled?:???:

[JonM]

thanks guys!

I am going to try one more lighting angle, because now it looks a a bit too flat to me,

and no the trees are opacity maps on planes :)

[CyberWolf]

Looks very well done especially the textures but the second one looks a little too bright.

[3Dan]

Sorry if this has already been suggested, but have you tried a displacement map instanced from the bump map on the pillar? Its faces are too straight.

[JonM]

alright I changed the lighting and worked on the bricks


http://www.jonmdesign.net/images/3d/bridge14.jpg



(this is turning into a WIP thread :P )