Bullets

[Jack Max]

http://img333.imageshack.us/img333/104/bulletseo3.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

--> Taking inspiration about bullets from usmanghiyas work, I make this one to learn about rendering and practice lathe technique. Please, leave me some comments! :wall:

[Daz85]

good but the bullets look a little sharp, the ends need to be more rounded.

[Galvanic]

I agree with Daz85, the bullets are too sharp. other than that it`s looking good. keep it up

[usmanghiyas]

nice attempt u can add smothnes by adding minor filet to the vertices and then its always good to go for some solid refrences when ur working :) .
keep working
Usman

[Jack Max]

Thanks you guys a lot for your valuable feedback! :D

This is a smoother version of the bullets, but I think it somehow not right, so I'm still working on it. It would be great if you give me some suggestion! :dance: :dance:

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9865/1bulletszs1.jpg

[Seaseme]

um, are the bullets rubber? Why are they black? Realism, the brass on the case would be a bit less shinny, and the bullet itself would have a very dark copper, almost like an old penny color. Either that, or a very flat silver color, as they're made of lead.

[roflol]

..and the part that sticks out is too long. Google and find a reference:)

[Jack Max]

Thanks for your useful idea buddy! I'm working on a new one now. ^_^

[Real 3D]

one suggestions, try adding a spotlight on top of the scene to make it a little burn, secondly the brass reflections are not correct, u can see that they are somewhat horizontal reflection, i mean there should be some of it but not that much, and should be a lil more darker, the bullet's front looks like rubber!

[Jack Max]

Thanks! I'm researching on the real bullets and a new version will be soon.

[McFly]

Also the blur is way too high! Lower it and you will get a more realistic image.