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31-10-2006, 07:36 PM
--> Taking inspiration about bullets from usmanghiyas work, I make this one to learn about rendering and practice lathe technique. Please, leave me some comments! :wall:
31-10-2006, 08:53 PM
good but the bullets look a little sharp, the ends need to be more rounded.
31-10-2006, 10:50 PM
I agree with Daz85, the bullets are too sharp. other than that it`s looking good. keep it up
01-11-2006, 01:07 AM
nice attempt u can add smothnes by adding minor filet to the vertices and then its always good to go for some solid refrences when ur working :) .
01-11-2006, 07:03 PM
Thanks you guys a lot for your valuable feedback! :D
This is a smoother version of the bullets, but I think it somehow not right, so I'm still working on it. It would be great if you give me some suggestion! :dance: :dance:
01-11-2006, 09:08 PM
um, are the bullets rubber? Why are they black? Realism, the brass on the case would be a bit less shinny, and the bullet itself would have a very dark copper, almost like an old penny color. Either that, or a very flat silver color, as they're made of lead.
02-11-2006, 04:39 AM
..and the part that sticks out is too long. Google and find a reference:)
02-11-2006, 05:31 AM
Thanks for your useful idea buddy! I'm working on a new one now. ^_^
02-11-2006, 11:47 AM
one suggestions, try adding a spotlight on top of the scene to make it a little burn, secondly the brass reflections are not correct, u can see that they are somewhat horizontal reflection, i mean there should be some of it but not that much, and should be a lil more darker, the bullet's front looks like rubber!
03-11-2006, 03:59 AM
Thanks! I'm researching on the real bullets and a new version will be soon.
04-11-2006, 12:31 AM
Also the blur is way too high! Lower it and you will get a more realistic image.
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