just a piano

[ronrn]

crits very welcome

[Gl2eEn]

good modelling..


but lighting, there is alittle problemm, just shadows are everywhere, its looks a little bit wierd

:)

[Brin]

I agree with Gl2eEn

The modeling is very good.

I think that some of the lights in the scene need to have shadows switched off, It is hard to picture what light source would cause the shadows to be cast in this way.

[Mariska3d]

The piano looks very good, but there are so many shadows.
Maybe some of the lights should have softer en lesse shadow(or none) and keep the shadow for one light hard.

[Camilus]

I Think The Piano is done very well.
But You made to much shadows.
What kind of render did you use ?

[ronrn]

Sorry,guess I posted in the finished work a little soon. I toned down shadows in this one.

[Brin]

Looks a lot better. :)

Well done

[ronrn]

One room done, 5 more to go.

[Bischofftep]

There ya go!

the lighting is much improved, though some fill lighting or backlighting might help soften the shadows a bit, unless you want that harsh edged look.

Quick note: the strings inside the piano appear to be a flat texture picmap, and it's blurry to boot. Model some strings, or put on a good map with strings intact!

-Bischofftep

[ronrn]

I modeled the strings, but each string has only 4 long faces. I should have given them at least 6 or 8 so they wouldn't appear flat.