Animation test needs a critique please.

[peng jie]

Here is a little animation of my practices by Macromedia Flash MX. It's just a test before doing 3d animation by Maya. Give me some suggestions please.thx.

http://bbs.chinadv.com/attachment/Day_070123/47_21405_575af7dc827adfc.jpg

Download: test_2d.swf (http://diy.hn8868.com/penge/movies/test_2d.swf) (58 KB)

Download: test_2d_v2.swf (http://diy.hn8868.com/penge/movies/test_2d_v2.swf) (65 KB)

[RipeX]

can't donwload it, it asks for password and username

[penge]

http://bbs.chinadv.com/attachment/Day_070123/47_21405_575af7dc827adfc.jpg
Download mov (133 KB)

test_2d.rar (http://bbs.chinavfx.net/attachments//200701/24090933-test_2dRAR.rar)[test_2d.mov]

[peng jie]

3d mov link to page:

http://jiepeng.blogspot.com/2007/01/test-posekeys.html

[kuriouz]

its quite good peng-jie. nice and bouncy.
Though when he realises that the trap door opened below his feet, his reaction doesn't seem quite right. It looked like he was going to make a leap. You'll probably need to work on the transition between when he realises the floor is not there and the part when he streches out to stop himself from falling.

Anyway besides that, its quite good! well done ;)

[peng jie]

Hey kuriouz;

Thank you.


http://diy.hn8868.com/penge/images/1leg_posekeys_V2.JPG
Download mov:1leg_posekeys_V2 (http://www.penge.cdd.cn/upload/22674/A84A3F31-08A2-484C-BD33-3C87EB6F1458}.mov)

[kuriouz]

This turned out alot better peng-jie! The transition with the rapid leg movements, now fits nicely with the whole movie.
Good job! :)

[peng jie]

http://diy.hn8868.com/penge/images/1leg_posekeys_V3.JPG

1Leg_posekeys_V3.mov(H264) (http://www.penge.cdd.cn/upload/22674/55394839-7B4B-40AE-B468-64542E274635}.mov)

[LostSoul]

I would reduce the amount of hop done after the door opens. It has a very unnatural feel to it. It should be there, but not quite so much emphasis.

[peng jie]

http://diy.hn8868.com/penge/images/1leg_posekeys_V4.JPG

1Leg_posekeys_V4.mov(H264) (http://www.penge.cdd.cn/upload/22674/3963366D-592F-479A-879F-5F46ED6D4320%7D.mov)

[peng jie]

1Leg_Final.mov(H264) (http://www.penge.cdd.cn/upload/22674/F43871F6-CD63-4AF9-8FEC-257CC33046A7%7D.mov)