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Carlos David
01-05-2007, 06:55 PM
http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/6/9/58214/Repitire.jpg

Hi, after a big time without nothing to post, I'm with this work made in the free hours.

This Scene is part of a history that a friend and I were writing since 14 years old and the "Reptire" character is a main character of this history. I had started for a contest, but that unfortunately I did not finish.
A little time later I had a problem on my HD and lost all the recent works, including this character.

I'm thankful for all that had helped giving tips and mainly to Jack Anderson who created the final concept of Repitire...

Sorry for my bad english...

s0nkitE
01-05-2007, 07:16 PM
the only thing that i dont like dude is that the beast needsdisplacement (it looks too clean and shiny) but well done its a great one and the dof and the composition and the colors(maybe litle less saturation would make it more film look but whatever)
4,5 stars for -displacement on the beast

lunarion6
01-05-2007, 09:42 PM
Ye the beast looks to clean and there could be some more detail on the gun, for the rest great scene =)

Bubbaloo
01-05-2007, 09:49 PM
Great scene and very nice textures!

inveni0
01-05-2007, 10:40 PM
Nice, and great idea (if the lizard thing was green, I'd be thinking Spiderman). I think there should be some saliva and drool in the mouth of the beast. It would make it feel more aggressive. Also, he should be a bit darker.

Creator
02-05-2007, 01:53 AM
Looks really cool. I don't think that there is to less displacement. Maybe you should make a more various Textur. It looks like a skinshader with one color.
You should also increase/decrease the bumping on some parts to give it more realism.

greetings Creator