lsdhillon
15-09-2007, 12:17 PM
This is first time I m trying out a full character. Here it is. C n C welcome. My WIP is here. renders are done default render with no special care.I was curious to c the final result.
http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/7715/44792475uc4.jpg
I hv very slow dial up connection so I ll post more renders later. Thanx
parleee
15-09-2007, 02:16 PM
Good for a first character. I like the face. He does have a few problems though. This biggest thing that stands out are the arms, they are too pinched at the armpit, and I think that the shoulders are quite a bit too wide in proportion to the character. The hand is good, but the thump could use some work, twisting it about 45 degrees outwards. Look at your own thumb to see where it is. As to the legs, not bad, just a bit too much creasing at the knee, and the calves are a little small compared with the rest of the character. Also, he's only got four toes.
Lastly, the face. It's nice for the most part, but I'd like to see a 3/4, and a wire. I think it maybe a bit too flat and sharp about the edges.
Great work for a first, keep it up!
lsdhillon
20-09-2007, 03:47 AM
here is what u asked for. Sorry for being late i tried to upload it quite number of times but dial up s@cks.
http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/9228/46438511eh1.jpg
pls remark
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